Fue muy entretenida de leer!, espero con ansias la siguiente temporada

Yeahhhhh, I think I'll be passing on this one. There were plenty of red flags the last two chapters, this just seals the deal. And looking at comments, it'll only get worse.

Not sure if anyone else mentioned it but Naruto did the killing blow to Kakuzu.

I wanted to read this. But after looking through the comments, I'm rather nervous about doing so, now. Haha

I'll come back to it, later.

No offense you kind of lost me when the declaration of war was proclaimed and then you have Naruto and Karin taking a chunin exam after that? You would think that they would bring all available Manpower to the front lines despite their rank if they're relatively ranked outside of their class which Naruto perfectly show throughout the series it's your story and everything but it doesn't make sense for an exam to be taken place once War has been declared or even taking a test

Honestly I really liked this story in the beginning to a point. it all ended on chapter seven in which I kind of lost my interest in the story with the white Knight/Knight in shining armor Naruto started to arrive. I really saw it arrive in the dark Naruto "fight" in which he pulled something out of his ass which made it feel a lot less memorable. but other than that it's a good story if you're into drama/romance stories.

plzzz update i love this story

Pause on that last review I made...it sounded better in my head ,but no I realize my mistakes. :c

OML FASTERRRRRRR NOT FAST ENOUGH FASTTTTER I NEED BABIESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

I quit here. *shivers...

That took a turn I was not expecting... In a good way though

Cool idea can't wait to see where it goes

didnt he kiss karin and bone ino multiple times?

see im in the middle of the chapter and i feel kinda bad cause i want him to let kurama come out in play in the 'bad way' mode with the 9 tails cloak but i dont want him to kill all the genin

LOL move bitch get out the way