pure genius. I'm shaking

This has to be one of the greatest fanfics that I've ever read. I'm honestly in tears. I've read so many comics about the Bat Family, Young Justice, and much more, but this fanfiction has to be better than any of those comics. With much awe at such beautiful writing, Felicity.

Well that was creepy.
Just thinking,
The voice is there.
Waiting.
Stalking.
Knows its almost time.
AND IT CREEPS ME THE FRICK OUT MAN
WHERES MY VOICE
Oh wait. Its on vacation. Forgot. Hehehehe.
Lucky stiff. Hope they enjoy Hawaii. XD.
Nice oneshot. Creepilicious.

It was really good

... Beautifully horrible. That ending was... uh... *Coughs into fist* angsty? I mean, tears could have happened. So close to happening, they were. This is what seriously could have happened to his mind, though. Not only that, but it was written so beautifully and... you should be very proud of yourself. You have an amazing style.

I think this quote would fit in well here:

“All it takes is one bad day to reduce the sanest man alive to lunacy. That's how far the world is from where I am. Just one bad day.” - The Joker, Batman: The Killing Joke.

Again, beautiful job.

- Cat

Beautiful. And I read this after watching "A Beautiful Mind" very recently. A sad ending though for our belved bird.

A great story, loved every part, you should do more story's that would great, thank you for writing, this story's makes me happy, well this one made me happy and sad but your other story's make me happy. Keep it up

Loved it. so dark and so hauntingly beautiful. very believable.
absolutely loved it

It's interesting to see it explored of how he coud ove turned out becuase of his past and what happened during the aftermath. I liked how you wrote it all out, it was cool to see him slowly realize the voice and accept what it said. I'm assuming when he jumped he ended it, ever think of doing a follow up? Maybe the aftermath of his actions, or if he possibly survived it? If you ever do/already did, I would love to read it. Even without a follow up, it's really good as a stand alone :)

So, did he die? Or fall? Or fly? O commit suicide?

Oh, wow. This is fantastic and horrible and beautiful and awful all that same time. I'd love to see what the trigger was that caused this to happen, though - I have a hard time believing that Dick would just randomly snap like that. He's a strong kid.

;-;
Jeesh I think I've never read that story of yours and I know why because angst and ;-; why so crueeeel? :(
It was amazing and the writing is wonderful and are you sure you didn't go crazy yourself? Because it looks so perfect and well described and bah I love you and hate you all together*-*
Poor Dickie:( poor Wally, poor Megan, poor Bruce. Poor everyone ;-;
I need a shot of fluff now hfd good thing you also have a bunch of those xp

Yeesh, dark much? It's been forever since I've read such pure angst. You pull it off really well, though, so I don't mind.

wow, that was really good. I like how you mirrored the first and last time the voice told Dick to trust it. 'm not sure about the reading about psychology part, but it definitely didn't detract anything. Thanks for writing!

I suspected paranoid-schizophrenia and in a way, I could have legit seen this happening to Dick. If the barriers of his mind broke. If the pressure had been too much (as kinda hinted with his exam in the beginning). If he had given into the darkness of Gotham. You did so well with the exchanges between Dick's secondary voice and then his own voice, fighting and pushing and then surrendering. I'M SORRY I MISSED IT WHEN IT FIRST CAME OUT. *HUGS* MUCH ENJOYMENT HAS BEEN HAD TODAY.