This... is amazing. What a great idea this was and... wow. Wow. I love this so much. Everything was fantastic, and I'm glad they got together in the end!

oh my gosh, what a story idea. theres just something to it that shows strength that sanji has. I kept thinking about it that was me. I was be crying everyone time and if there was a point that I didn't cry, I would feel something die inside i'm sure. I wouldn't be able to survive that. I really wondered if sanji was going to kill himself after zoro went up in flames that time. i'm just glad it wasn't real for him and that they are together now .

O.O

Have you seen the movie Fight Club? The whole dream twist shocked me just as much as the twist in that movie when I first saw it. This story is just PHENOMENAL. This is definitely going in my favorites. Just... WOW.

*Mind is still blown*

Seriously. This story is so damn AWESOME. I was literally feeling anger, sadness, happiness, regret, Hell, I felt I was on an emotional roller coaster. WOW.

great ideas and writing! this is really good.

There was so much effort in this! I loved it; got a bit scary watching those various ways to die (I hope it wasn't too painful for Zoro...)! Was he curse? Although I may argue that Sanji is also cursed in that dream AU for loving Zoro...

Thanks for the awesome read!

Kiz

Oh my god... Never read this while watching "My Girl". I bawled like a baby. The beginning was so sad, but the ending so sweet. Really like this.

Aw! Zoro and Sanji are so cute! Poor Sanji though! That sounds like a horrible thing to live through. I don't know what I would do if someone I cared about kept dying in front of me. You did a great job writing this! I really enjoyed it! :)

-Yvonne

For a moment I was a little confused by the description of "AU inside of canon", but that totally cleared up along the way.
Wow, this whole thing was written so well. Especially like the way you portrayed the relatively gory ways Zoro died hahahaha.

Kinda wondering, did you actually have a very clear image of what the rest of the crew and Zoro dreamt about? I don't know, it just seems like Sanji's was pretty heavy and slightly traumatising, I'm wondering if the rest of the crew suffered almost as much as Sanji did even though they 'came to accept' their feelings faster. The rest didn't sound as bad, but Zoro says "Almost sounds better than my dream,", so i'm guessing his was pretty bad too?
Sorry, am I thinking too much into this? OTL

ohmygawwwwd that was perfect. you are such a good storyteller and your writing style is incredibly easy to follow. I loved this story. oh, and the plot is very original.. the horror though was a bit shocking and I'm so happy I found this while browsing the web! ugh I'm so sorry I'm not articulate enough to be able to explain exactly what it is that I love about this fic so much. was brought here from zoros birthday present on tumblr

This is amazing! In the beginning I was very, very confused. Why were they not looking for the reason of it happening? why only zoro? why... so many questions. They were solved in the end. You are also very good at describing blood and gore, I was grossed out by the stomach thing...
I do wonder how Zoro's dream went! considering he is jealous, I think he didn't get a happy ending ;)
I also keep wondering about what went through his head when he was awake and watching over Sanji. It must have been a bit strange for the others, they weren't together but he was sitting next to Sanji in the infirmary? I love things like that!
thanks for the story!

That was definitely one of the most original and well-constructed stories I've read on this sight, not just in the One Piece category. Very nice job, I'm thoroughly impressed.

That was an absolutely lovely story :} I loved it

Oh, this was brilliant. Some parts were difficult to read through of course, but thank god we got a happy ending! :D I loved how you portray their relationship and how Sanji's perception of it changes over the course of the fic. The differences and similarities between dream!Zoro and real!Zoro was a nice touch, as was the totally dorky and understated way they came to an understanding at the end.

I do have to wonder why Sanji's dream was so horrifying compared to most of the others'? I guess he was unconsciously being super stubborn about accurately recognizing and accepting his feelings ...Luffy's, Usopp's and Franky's were so hilariously predictable, and certainly gave a lighthearted touch to the fic. The others' were more vague, so perhaps there were some difficult parts of their dreams that they didn't want to talk about or dwell on. Zoro's simple description of what he learned from his dream was such an inaccurate reflection of what the dream was actually about, but that is so him, lol.

This fic totally reminded me of Once More With Feeling by Aleia15. Have you read it? If not, I highly recommend you check it out!

Great story

Awesome and nice story!
Thank you. : ]

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