nice job 10 out of 10 in my book please make a few more chapters because this feels like it need s more

Cute.

I know you want constructive criticism but all I can say is cute.. Too cute! EEEE! *Flees to read more of your Vi/Cait fics*

Aww that was so sweet :3
When Vi was on her way home I thought "oh my god I hope nothing happened to Caitlyn" and I was so relieved to see that she was already home x3
Anyway that was a very well written oneshot. Loved it

This is a really nice, simple take on Vi in the force and with Cait.

Nice little one-shot although I thought it was going to turn very dark... very quickly. Vi being left alone contemplating her emotions for Caitlyn felt like an easy tragedy getting set up. Not going to lie... I kinda wanted it to be one... Yet, I digress.

The story was a nice and heartwarming recreation between the pairings relationship that really shed it in a unique light. It's funny to think as Vi being protected by the purple clothed crackshot but it was very well executed. The details and Vi's emotions were extremely well written and I really felt the emotion you tryed to portray. A very well written part.

There were a couple of small tweaks I would have made (Like the Morgana comparison. Should have brought up her baking) but otherwise it was a very well written One-shot.

Unfortunately it is a well written one-shot. Personally not a huge fan of such short stories (Under 10k words to be honest) as they always seem either a little rushed or just simply the craving to want more from the story. That being said it's more of a personal feeling that varies from person to person but I think you definitely pulled off the intended effect. I truly wish you the best of luck on your next couple of stories. Although I doubt you need it!

-Winkleson

P.s. Been up 20ish hours now so this review might not be as clear as day. Sorry about that!