A chilling, fantastical tale.

This story deserves a lot more reviews. Great writing!

This was great. This was truly great. Thanks so much for writing!

Katherine Briggs said once that the line between faeries and the unquiet and dangerous dead is hair-thin. Jareth-as-demon is completely appropriate here. I adore this characterization. It has more tell-than-show than I'd use, but the details with the show are just so glittering fantastic that I have no cause for complaint. It's good. It's very, VERY good. It's delicious. The smoke of the offering fills the nostrils.

The only qualm I have (and this comes because I'm an utter sucker for redemption stories and have to watch my appetite like I would for chocolate cake) is that Sarah/Cerah is destined to save him. I hate the idea that Sarah has to serve the King and save him, because screw him! He should beg for her on his knees and not get her-not if she's a means to an end. But darn it all... I do love redemption stories. And I like the way this one's being told. Could go badly.

I'm very, very much digging your depiction of the Fae. Lots of authors go the easy route, and make Jareth a man with some fantastic powers. But you've gone above all that, with someone who has magic at his essence, all wrapped in occasional skin, made of inhuman appetites and desires. It's powerful stuff, especially here in the second chapter, when we see how his feelings for Sarah are contrasted with his essential nature. I'm not sure I entirely trust your Jareth (which is great), but I feel very strongly that he's a protagonist, not an antagonist (something, again, which is rarely done.)

I'm so glad this story got recommended to me. Really intelligent crafting. I'm excited to read more.

I'm also beginning to wonder if Sarah's death isn't somehow also Jareth's fault, given what we see here.

Are you going to do another piece that follows this?

Beautifully written,thank you. :)

Uaaauuu, uma das fics Labyrinth mais dramáticas que já li aqui. Só tragédia! Ainda bem que teve um final feliz.

This was a great story. It was unusual and imaginative, with great imagery and a fairly consistent tone. Nice job. I'm looking forward to your next endeavor.

Lovely! So different, yet believable in the realm of the original story. I do hope you'll write a follow-up! I enjoyed reading this very much!

Fanny

Yay! happy ending... I think once Sarah's parents see her at anyrate.

Nice fic I enjoyed it!

YAY! Go Sarah or Cerah... wonder what will happen to her human family will she see them again?

Oh, this is wonderful! I am always eager for stories that don't fall into the same old tired pattern and this is a gem! It's dark and delicious and I am totally hooked.

Oh my, I'm on pins and needles to see what happens next.

Yikes! A powerful story you have unfolding here. I can't wait for more!