Wow! Yes, should've brought John with him. Stupid.

Thank you so much for using Fall Out Boy! Also, everything I have read by you has been amazing! Don't stop writing

This was so good I loved that it was from Mary's point of view

Wow. That was interesting!

I liked dark-Mary and that we got to read from her perspective. I also liked how even Lestrade told her that John was and is Sherlock's. I enjoyed reading this, thank you!

Oh heavens, that's deeply twisted. Poor John caught in between Mary and Sherlock and clueless as to how far Sherlock would go to get John back.

You've made Sherlock out to be the twisted, sociopathic, manipulative person everyone thinks he is but really only when someone or something is in the way of what he feels is his and his right to protect.

A chilling but thoroughly enjoyable story.

Very well written.

ok that was seriously one of the most wonderful things I have ever read!

*w* That almost made me cry. Listening to them from her perspective... it was beautiful and horrible and wonderful and GAH! THAT WAS SO GOOD! I didn't expect her to shoot anyone - that was a total surprise - but it flowed beautifully in with the rest, and John's reaction to Sherlock saying "steal you from her" was so perfect and... and that's a run-on sentence. I'm tired. It's four AM. I'm going to sleep. I would leave a longer review, but I have class in the morning XD Absolutely beautiful job on this fic, and I can't wait to see what you come out with next )

Very good.

Deep. And shame on John for submitting to Sherlock in Mary's home and bed. Shame on Sherlock for putting it all in her face, knowing she was there. He took it far and had to deal with the consequences. Poor crazy Mary. A bad situation made worse b/c of John's cowardice in not ending the relationship before getting with Sherlock and Sherlock's hubris.