This is very nicely done. I can imagine Shaw being scared of few things, but caring is one of them.

It's sooooo beautiful... Finch was always trying to be a protector, and amazingly did it well!

Your writing is so powerful. I'm captivated.

I like how you captured Shaw's wariness in this.

Oh, nicely done! I came here from a recommendation on POI Discussion Forum and I am glad I did. This is a wonderful twin character study of two damaged and prickly people.

Very true to characters and great ear for their dialogue tics.

Excellent depiction of the interplay between Shaw and Finch. Loved the subtle built up of tension, and the release at the end.

Ooh, interesting little piece there. Nice job!

This fic was great. You definitely have Shaw's voice down. Love it.

This is so sad... And rather logical. Both Finch and Cole do share a lot of similarities. Though I'll never ship Shaw with them Finch the same. It is canonically believable that something like this scene might happen.

i love this fic! you write both of them very well and i like the intraction between them

This was really well-written and the voices and behavior of both of them were spot on. I definitely enjoy reading this story.

Thanks for sharing!

good start … can we get more ? please :D

Awesome! I think you characterized Finch and Shaw very well! Very good job!

I would love to see this theme continue. You have great insight with the characters.