So I reviewed this back in 2013, and followed the story, but I never caught back up. Having finally done so I'm thoroughly glad that I did! Thank you for an amazing story!

Fantastic, I love the twists in this story. I hope to read more of your stories. DB

Aw, i loved this whole story so much! Well done!

Interesting story. I think River may have accepted Rose's place in this universe a bit too easily, but otherwise good job integrating everything.

AW THAT IS ADORABLE!

This is GREAT! I love how you tied up all the loose ends and gave River an equal place.
That was fantastic; I think the Doctor would agree.

Loved your fabulous storytelling and sad to see it end. Thank you soo very much for not giving up and continuing to the end. I look forward to more wonderful story from you.

Wonderful ending , and this means "a 1981 ariving" had make Jackie and Pete know their daughter's story even befor they first 1984 meet ?! Hah

WOh,love Jackie‘s letter ,so Jackie !
Good job ,nice work, amazing imagenation!

Been following this story for a while and it's bittersweet to see it end. Lovely job and I hope you produce more!

Brilliant ending to a brilliant story.

Wow I haven't reviewed in a while, sorry, I stopped reading updates for Fanfictions until I finished glee and I finally finished and then Netflix added the next season so I just finally caught up. So basically, their daughter is Clara's mother? Because that's kinda cool. And sad considering Clara's mother dies... But that would be cool of them to travel with Clara and she's their granddaughter. Wow I'm rambling. I do that a lot.

- Q.E. III

I'd love to read about them finding their granddaughter. Though I hope this doesn't mean their daughter would die.

I loved this story! I demand a sequel! (Not really but pleaseeeee)
A sequel would be nice.

I loved this story. Great ending!