Lovely story, thank you.

This is lovely, and it fits well into the canon story. I can easily see Takumi having days like this, and Gii being so sweet and concerned. Nice job!

It is really nice to have a fanfiction like this even in real life,Daisuke seems not bother about Mao's going through right now like he doesn't even know what Mao feels right now ,it's really sad.

I find this utterly beautiful because I have been feeling this exact same way as Takumi has in this story. i always feel I'm the only one experiencing it though.