Oh my god! I love it can't wait for more

I think Daryl would be surprised and Rick will probably hold her at gun point for a minute, as is is MO lol.

Hey there. I think you manage it well. But I was really wishing for a change of plot there and Daryl don't leave letting his brother go. Merle could come latter even if he was not welcome .

Well done, I liked the original dialogues I hope there will be an original plot as well. :D

Well, I know they have a close call in there, but yet they found David too soon. But it was a nice Daryl and Sarah interaction

Very nice despite the fact I"d really like if they have take just few clothes. LOL

Daryl jealous is always good. ;)

Hey there. I'm quite behind in your storie and I know some of the next communities but even there there were treats right?

Also I don't know, but our society are too ahead of the primitive one, so I don't think we'd adapt easy by being nomade. And for my solution (not to end the zumbi word) but tô create a new society I think the trees is the best solution. Wakers can't come up and if it is high and quiet enough they could probably be unnoticed by both Walkers and humans. But, sure enough a society need rules and laws because there all tipes of people and without something that could make them afraid they would not respect others. And in my opinion there is no limit for those kind of people.
Thanks for a very nice story and for your on plot. I love TWD fanfic but i' m kind of bored to read the same story all over again only to squeese the OCs in there.

Well done

Oh, very nice. And I am glad you have spared us that stupid Randall arch. Thanks

oh my goooood i was so excited to see you finally updated! but goddamn this chapter hurt my soul! these two fools need to have an HONEST FRICKIN TALK i swear this slow burn will be the end of me haha

Poor Sarah and Daryl

I. Absolutely. LOVE. This. Story. Sarah is such a badass woman and I love all her for all flaws and imperfections! Her arc development is amazing and joy to watch progress. Her relationship with our Daryl is SO realistic and it literally makes me squeal when I see them interact! Your depiction of Daryl is also probably one of the most accurate of any I’ve ever read (which is a lot). You’ve portrayed him to a perfect T (dog lol) and I appreciate you SO much for it. I know this story hasn’t been updated for a while, but if you read this I hope you’ll consider picking it back up again! I understand that writing a book takes motivation and that you have a life outside of writing and I totally respect that! Thank you for writing this amazing piece, it was a true and absolute joy to read!

I really liked your story. The character development was awesome and so was the slow build of the relationship. I’m just sorry it wasn’t longer. I hope writing is somewhere in your future plans. Kudos to you.

Ok, wow, really? This is a truly awful place to leave it.

OMG... that reunion between daryl and Sarah was absolutely gold! Daryl asking carol...glen face palming...daryl being confused! Fabulous!

I love Monster, but I love this too. I hope you'll come back and update both soon. You have a knack for writing, and I can't wait to see where you go with your stories.