Previously you said that Grace was allergic to pineapples, but here Danni gives her a fruit salad with pineapple in it.

Olha, tudo bem? Eu só falo portugues, entao espero que possa entender atravez de tradução.
Desde os primeiros capítulos sabemos que Danni não gosta muito do Havaí por ser um lugar que tem muito abacaxi, pois Grace é alérgica a abacaxi, mas então Danni derrepente coloca abacaxi no lanche de Grace? Ela com certeza não é uma mãe desleixada que não cuidaria da saúde de sua filha.

Olá tudo bem? Eu so fqlo em portugues, entao eapero que voce consiga entender atravez de tradução. Então eu estava lendo o capítulo 16 e derrepente Steve pergunta o significado de "Danno" para Danielle, e então eu percebi que era uma pergunta muito estranha, pois em nenhum momento você escreveu alguém chamando ela de "Danno", e eu com certeza conferi todos os capítulos do primeiro até o capítulo 16 e realmente ninguém chama Danielle de "Danno".

So I'm through with this and I'm curious how long it will take them to realize what they're feeling for each other and that Steve seems to get jealous easily :)
Well written.

Regards,
Lunary

Hi,
Just letting you know that your fic is addictive, I couldn't stop myself and ended reading it from beginning to end.
I love your Danni, as you said she is her own character. I have to confess that the story progress in a slower pace that I'm used to but I actually like it, it give more space for building their character. And Danni may say what she wants but I'm seeing people interested in her everwhere, both as a friend and something more. And Steve is so obvious that is embarrassing.
I'm actually scared to begin the next story, I'm afraid of being unable to stop reading once I begin.
Thanks for sharing this story, it was amazing.

Hi,
I like your story and your Danni although is strange to see a version of Danny that is so calm all the time. I intended to read all the chapter before sending a review but I just saw a minor detall in this chapter that may be a mistake, sorry if is not.
In this chapter Danni prepared a fruit salad with pineapple for Grace, and I think that in a previous chapter she told Steve that Grace is alergic to them. I haven't finished the chapter so I don't know if it was premeditated but it looked strange to me. As I said if this wasn't a mistake sorry for saying anything, but I'm also an amateur writter and I know that sometimes is difficult to take note of this little detalls.
Good job.
Have a nice day.

he's just so FUCKING SEXY!

I am really enjoying the fic so far but in an earlier chapter Danni said she disliked Hawaii because grace was allergic to pineapple and in this chapter (17) she gives grace a salad with pineapple in it for lunch. Am rather confused is it a typo ie. Was "With pineapple" supposed to be" without pineapple"?

So I'm totally in love with this story first of all, I love how you've made Danni her own character and her interactions with Steve and the team are just amazing. Secondly, I noticed at the beginning of the chapter that Danni made Grace a snack that had pineapple but I thought Danni told Steve that Grace was allergic to pineapple? I might have read that in a different story and it just transferred, so sorry if I got it wrong, but just wanted to ask.

Tee hee. Sorry, Danni, 'Danno' is going to stick like glue. I love it!

Very nice! I have been meaning to ask: do you have a face for Danni? I've also been meaning to review more, but things got interesting and my curiosity's been getting the better of me. It's still champing at the bit, but I thought I ought to at least review once. Please, don't take my lack of reviews as disinterest, but eagerness to see what happens next. McDanni all the way! Chin will make a good big brother figure for Danni, even though she's got plenty of them already.

I'm really happy you made this. Five O is not the most popular of fanfictions so it took me awhile to find it, but I really like it. I'm glad you haven't shortened down episodes into one chapter. Don't get me wrong, if they can do it right and get the right length and details I'm all for it, but it's refreshing that someone doesn't squeeze an episode into a chapter.

I just found this story and I am completely in love with it! Great job! :)

I have just found your Danni series and just finished the first story and I am seeing a little something starting between Danni and Steve and I like it. Can't wait to see where this goes. My only question is: How is this going to work with Catherine in the picture? I love her and Steve on the show, but in this universe, it just adds a little something to the mix. Especially is there is something going on between Danni and Steve. Again, can't wait to see where this goes.

Moving on the next installment.

Michelle

Great chapter.