| Reviews for Timeless |
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Three123 chapter 1 . 10/2 this book is so intense n I just luv when they get to know who her father is plz tell me Patricia takes her revenge on Klaus and plz update soooooooooon |
cooldudette1 chapter 2 . 10/10/2019 please update it is really good i really enjoy it |
KakarotSSJ7 chapter 2 . 3/14/2019 Please update and continue |
alicia7788 chapter 2 . 2/20/2019 UPDATE PLEASE |
AwesomeFangirlOtaku01 chapter 2 . 2/6/2019 Ooooh Does Elijah love Patricia? OMG Imagine that. Patricia having having a harem of gods, demigods, titans, originals, and other supernatural creatures. XD I can just see it |
Morning Songbird chapter 1 . 1/11/2019 Kronos, right? I was right. |
Morning Songbird chapter 1 . 1/11/2019 Kronos, right? I was right. |
917brat chapter 2 . 11/24/2018 wonderful simply wonderful. I love this story, and how you have everything playing out. I seriously hope that you decide to update again soon because I can't wait to read more and find out just what you have planned next; please keep it up. |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/27/2018 Update |
bluecheetah8 chapter 2 . 4/8/2018 This is great, can't wait to read more! |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/25/2018 So is Patricia still faithful or did she cheat already? |
xrysatsan chapter 2 . 3/23/2018 PLEASE UPDATE HERE MORE OFTEN 3 |
Arianna Le Fay chapter 2 . 3/23/2018 how could you make patricia be the original version of hera and klaus the cheating hybrid version of zeus i mean what the hell it is despicable |
NicoleR85 chapter 2 . 3/23/2018 Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. |
BatGames chapter 4 . 9/3/2017 This is so BS. Only FOUR people should know who Patricia is: Kronos, as the Titan of time he knows when his domain is messed with and would be righted, Luke as Kronos is possessing him, Hecate as she had the BS flashback that she shouldn't have as TIME isn't her domain, and Poseidon as he would force Hecate to tell him. EVERYONE AND THEIR MOTHER SHOULD NOT KNOW. Chiron shouldn't know, he doesn't know a child's godly parent until they are claimed. The Mystic Falls witches shouldn't know sh*t as why would the four in the know tell random witches. How did they even know she was a vampire or awake, they know sh*the they shouldn't which is the worst thing to do in a story as it breaks any immersion. Canon changes since Percy didn't exist: Zeus master bolt stayed stolen, he launches a war with Poseidon. Poseidon is the only Big Three member with his symbol of power. Golden fleece is lost as Clarisse did not finish the requirements for the prophecy. ThalIan dies, Kronos heals faster, Camp Half Blood dies as the camps protections fall completely. Chiron no longer works there, Tantalus stays, and Olympus is not warned of Kronos resurrection. Titans Curse would not happen, Atlas is still free and random monsters start to hold up the world. Athena does not check on other Titans and all of Kronos fellow surviving, and hostile to the gods, Titans are free. Battle of Labyrinth, Pan fades on his own, no camp ton infiltrate and the Titans have basically wiped out any organised resistance that demigods could make. Kronos possesses Luke without anyone knowing, and hence the world is screwed. If Sally wasn't a demigod and Patricia was instead Percy's half-sister then this would work. |