so far so good
I really think this story is interesting
cause of their adventurous kidnapping (this is the process that I really appreciate, I mean... this is the middle of the kidnapping event it self)

but in chapter 11 I feel insecure...
how will Sara escape? Or will he be tortured? If he will be tortured I think the story will be... weird? cause Sara have to handle yuuri
So I afraid of Sara being broken(?)

And one more thing ... I still belief that this will end with Yuuri come back to Wolfram but the main charas here is yuuri and sara
so... will yuuri finally fall in love with sara? I hope not.

oh my god! you're back! I'm so excited that this story will be continued... wow!

Eh!? Doshite! Why would you leave us desperately wanting more! And...and poor Yuri, just what did Sara do!? /O/O/ I feel like a voyeur yet I still want more! So must Sara and his growing 'affection', please update soon! The search has become so frenzied, and now with Julia's presence...Gambatte!

I've beencwaoting for this so long! Thank you for writing this amazing piece!

I loved this chapter after such a long time. Thanks and keep updating.

I was very excited when you updated! It looks like Sarah refuses to give up and poor Yurri, I don't know how much more he can take! Update soon :)

PLEASE update faster!

Hi, I think it should be 3, but with some changes. As that rather than being captured later Berias is attacked before arriving with sara. Berias could also be attacked when trying to protect yuri and Sara. (Or one) when one or both are out of the shelter. Receiving a deep wound in his chest and being cared for by Sara.
Hola, pienso que debería ser la 3, pero con algunos cambios. Como que en lugar de ser capturado, Berias sufra un ataque más adelante protegiendo a yuri o Sara cuando uno o ambos estén fuera del refugio, recibiendo una herida profunda en su pecho y siendo cuidado por sara.

Feeling yuuri one ''chest tightness unable to explain (jealousy xD). (Sorry if I take many liberties with my idea or interrupt your plot or something u-u, really.'s just ... after days and weeks of not being able to enter to inter, I come and see you've updated to chapter eight *O*
I'M too excited! n-nU. is that I love sara! *U* .
And you write so many stories about him I love you too! 3
is more I marry you! :D
Just kidding xD (at least we get married) unless you want it to not be n., because I really love you *.*
(and not harassment xD)
Bye, kisses and update soon please u , sorry if this poorly written, not handling very well English n-nU, but I'm getting better doesn't it? (no answer -U)
I beg updated please! and if you have time maybe you can also update Twinless! :D
That story has me in love!
Well, almost all your stories have me crazy *-*
Anyway, bye
This will tell you in Spanish because I do not think I have written well
Mucha suerte con tus demás historias, son hermosas
Y por favor, no las abandones :)
Good luck with your other stories, are beautiful!
And please, do not leave :)

I'm glad you updated. I am waiting for everyone's reactions when they learn Yurri isn't in the castle. They won't be very happy. And Sara seems to have everything under control for now. Now I wonder who was following them. Ah well, I'll wait for the next chapter :)

1 please 3

I really love this story and hope that you will update sooner. I think 2nd will make a nice twist in your story.

Perhaps you should do both 2 and 3? You could easily missed those up. And maybe a little bit of number 1. They could be attacked. But make it to the castle. Yuri and Sara can spend quality time while Wolfram and the others sneak into Small Shimaron and figure out they Arn't there. The news could reach Sara and then Yuri asks Sara to go back (thinking they were close enough that Sara would say yes) but Sara refuses still and so Sara sends Baries to hold someone against Yuri so he will stay. Or something like that. But anyways. Nice chapter. I'm glad you updated. And once again Yuri is still trying to mend the friendship :)

This needs more reviews. It's awesome. Can I do some art for this?

i love this story 3
I love the way you handle the personality of each character, besides that left me shocked with this fifth chapter
So I'm looking forward to chapter six
please do not take too long if?
and sorry if not spelled correctly but my English is minimal n-nU

I really love this story! You really captured Yuri's innocent behavior and Sara's possessiveness. I'm glad you updated and I hope to read more from you soon! :)