ummmmmmmmmm can i just tell you something?

i'm dead now
literally no heart anymore
yep
that's it

im crying cause BEN

Wow! Huge plot twist! I enjoyed this fic but one minor criticism is all the line breaks. Still loved it though 3

the german translation is messed up quite a bit
the first one's alright but the second one would be „Ah, ja können sie. Ich bin in Zimmer 116 habe aber scheinbar meinen Schlüssel verlegt"
the third One is ok 4. „Sie ist meine Mutter. Ich bin James Stanford. Ich habe die letzten zwei Jahre in Deutschland studiert also dachte ich mir, ich würde mit dem Zug hierher fahren und sie mit einem Besuch überraschen.”
5.„Dann hoffe ich, sie freut sich, Sie zu sehen. Haben sie einen schönen Tag.”
6. „Danke, ihnen auch.” You probably translated these sentences using google translator but it really only is good for translating single words.
Also I, as a German, feel practically obligated to correct wrong translations (also it's really annoying to see German word randomly put together to form a sentence) I really like your works about Alex Rider. Our fandom really deserves more that good fanfiction.

OMG FEELS! My emotions have just been...I don't even know...my emotions...

You killed Ben? And Yassen (the badass assassin and secretly Alex dad)? Whyyyy?
But yeah I loved the story :)

I'm loving this story, but the part about hitting like a girl was sexist and unnecessary. That kind of stuff discourages girls and enforces sexism. I would greatly appreciate it if you would change it to something else, because that kind of stereotyping is uncalled for. And I realize you probably weren't trying to be offensive, and it was an honest mistake from seeing those kind of ideas all the time in movies, TV, books, etc, so I'm not angry at you. I would just appreciate it if you would change that. Thank you.
But in regards to the rest of it, I really like the fic! I'm all for BAMF Alex, and cold-blooded murderer Alex. Wow, that sounds intense. Well I suppose it is.

why u kill Ben?! *sobs uncontrolably* awesome fic!

i hate you so freaking much! how could you do this to me! to write such an amazing story so full of great moments and a roller coaster ride of emotions, i freaking loved it!

You MONSTER! How could you do such a thing? I am crying...
Okay, now that the sadness has worn off, I have to say that I really enjoyed this story and I did not see the ending coming. Thank you.

I'm going to kill you. HOW COULD YOU! *sob
You better update fast.

Please post a notice when the sequel is Up and running!

OH MY GOD I CANT BELIVE YOU DID THAT

I hate you. You killed off Ben. Garr.

Sequel pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease