Genius~

I was reading this in my living room while my family was swarming around getting ready for school. I had to change the page if they came within three feet of me. And i had to cover my face cause almost got a nosebleed. Good job, you wrote a fan fiction that i was desperate enough to read during the day to finish it.

Why didn't he when he was sleeping, that would have been...

Haha this was so cute! And i love all of your omakes! I am definitely fav-ing this story (btw not something I do often so you're special)

I actually think Nezumi and Safu would get along pretty well...then, at the same time, completely hate each other. They're so weird. That's why, while they're fighting, i'll be the one shoving Shion into it just to see what happens and cheer them all on!XD
And, Shion, if you knew how to knock someone out like that, then why do you let people beat you up all the time?! Masochistic airhead .
please update soon!

I can imagine some sort of reaction like that from Nezumi -nods-
Shion, are you developing masochistic tendencies?

Wow, Nezumi...just wow.

Nezumi, you're such a soft hearted tsundere XDXD Good job

funny

Wow! Quite realistic and in character... I think? Love the little bits of humour scattered around. Better living through denial eh? Keep it up :)

That was cute and sad XD But thank you for writing it! Safu doesn't get enough love... I don't get why so many people hate her. But we've talked about that already.
Anyway it was really nice. I can see picture her yelling at Nezumi, she's quite forward after all! And yes, I guess if she could, she would do something like that... she wouldn't stand in the way of Shion and Nezumi, she woudn't force Shion to love her. After all when I read the book/manga, I have the impression that she's already accepted that Shion doesn't see her like that.
And the ending... Was it a dream, or was it a real illusion? Hmmm... I like how you handled that, there's no way to know for real. It was quite bittersweet. Of course, I do like Nezumi comforting Shion. That's always nice ;)
Thanks again for this new story!

Kya xD I love this chapter so much :D

Aww, it was so perfect; thank you, that's the fanfic I always wanted to read :) (And you included Safu and Nezumi arguing in the end xD And they even ended up being silenced by Shion's secret grip ;D) I'm looking forward to more from you This will always have a special place on my 'favorite fanfictions'-list :D

That was such a cute story! And so well-written, your English is excellent. I loved Nezumi's clean freak ocd and hair fetish, and his interactions with Shion were so fun to read.

Loving this story...great job!