this sounds wonderful and I would love to read more of this please keep this up!

first Dragon-Steel dual type
Dialga is the only dragon steel that there is now dude

Can't wait to see what happens next.

huh

Interesting start to this. Must have more asap. Keep it up, love it so far. Can't wait to see what happens next.

nice job

Love the idea so far but U need a new chapter!

So far, aside from the grammatical errors, the story was great. Also, the Dragon/Steel dual-type Eeveelution was an awesome idea for a new Eeveelution & having Ashe be said Eeveelution at that too.

pease update soon.

I love the story please write more soon.

Interesting plot... I've never seen something quite like it. Why female Ash, though, and not a protagonist from a game?

And, unfortunately, some criticism. This chapter, including the author's note at the end, was one, big run-on sentence. I saw no periods on the first read through, but I'm more than slightly reluctant to try to find any in the first chapter. I'd like to put favorite or follow this story, but I can't stand the lack of punctuation.

I understand that writing is something most of us do for fun and not for the sake of correcting grammatical errors, but I have a few little hints I believe are helpful. (You may disagree and say I'm an insufferable know-it-all.)
1) After someone asks a question, there should be a '?'.
2) In quotations (" "), you include the punctuation in the marks. Ex. "I'm going to the store!" I said. Or "I'm going to the store," I said.
3) Most of the time, the three periods aren't necessary. If you can, replace them with a comma or other punctuation.
4) The beginning of a statement must be capitalized. (Ex. "Dragons are awesome!"
5) The names of all Pokemon, people, cities, and Gyms are capitalized. (I realize this is most likely a typo, so don't take it too seriously.)
6) Here are some misspelled words in their correct forms: panic, psychic, predecessor, whining, pleasantries, glaring, widened, tiring, behemoth, telltale, tyrannical, and straight.
7) You're and your are two different things. Your shows possession (your Pokemon) and you're is a contraction for you are (you're a Pokemon or you are a Pokemon).

And some good praise, too! (hopefully offsetting the large amount I just typed, because it seems more than a bit pretentious to me right now.)

I love how you're including everyone. That's rather difficult to do, as there are so many to show and describe.
I admire you for the large vocabulary you show in this story, punctuation errors or not. It totally makes my day.
I like that Ashe gets her memories back, but I really hope that there's a reason beyond 'Oh, I'm human again, so let's go do the stuff we used to do!'
When you do describe something, you use so much imagery.

And, I hope you update or reply to this soon, because I feel this is the type of fanfic I want to read.
Buh-bye,
Esah-Zhurah'Tesh-Dar