I am in love with this story
I'm not a fan of this shipment but this really but you really surpassed my expectation for this story . I wish there were more writers like yousorry if I did offend anyone

Obsession stories are hard to write, even more so when the male character has a huge fanbase. Most readers will want the mcs to end up together irregardless of everything he puts the female character through but then again there will be a portion of readers who will bash the author for glorifying abuse (even worse when it's rape) irregardless of what the author's real intentions were so it does become a real dilemma for the author to not offend anyone's sensibilities and at the same time, write an ending that will appeal to both the factions of readers hence it's completely understandable that you had to rewrite the ending a couple of times. For that reason alone I applaud you for writing a Sasusaku story with an obsessed Sasuke.
The SasuSaku fandoms seriously lacks good stories and it's so satisfying to see Sasuke chasing after Sakura and not the other way around for once. I like how you made Sasuke retain his original personality and did not turn him into a lovey dovey yandere or make him likeable. The scene after Sakura's death where he doesn't deem it worthy to even give her a proper burial is cold and brutal but very much the way the real Sasuke would've behaved. It would've been ooc and cliched if he suddenly realised his love for her at the very moment. Instead he admits to barely even liking her as a friend so good job on retaining their original personalities. I won't lie I was disappointed in Sakura though when after everything she still loved Sasuke but then again it's similar to the canon Sakura. I felt like Sasuke's punishment at the end was not enough (which is why the comments saying that he didn't deserve it are shocking, have y'll forgotten EVERYTHING he put her through?) And I was lowkey rooting for Gaara and Sakura specially after she admitted that Gaara had replaced Sasuke's place in her heart which had gotten my hopes high lol but then again I'm browsing the SasuSaku tag.
I like how ambigious the ending was and the fact we got to see Naruto's perspective made the story wholesome. It also set up tons of scenarios for a sequel.
I'm glad you've written this story. Thank you for contributing to the fandom. And honestly it's difficult to appease all the readers at the same time so go on with the way you have things planned, don't let people's negative remarks affect you. It is after all YOUR story.

I love your writing. But please, stay safe!

i think you should try a different area of work, like books which makes you happy. you could try being a librarian or working at a popular book store while writing/publishing your own book!

Great story so far! I have to thank you for sharing this.
Also I'm still amazed how some poeple still don't understand Sasuke's character. And I'm talking about some comments on this. But they are like ussualy that kind of people who only saw the anime ~that was so changed by pierrot O.o~ and didn't ever touched the manga.

Yes, I'm in the mood to fight on the internet. I'll go to twitter for this now lmao

Any job that causes you to self-harm to cope with it, just isn't worth it. Dip a toe. Even if you start out slowly in the professional writing business, it's still a start. That in itself will do wonders for your mental health :)

Interesting take on Sasuke and Sakura though Sasuke would never be obsessed about Sakura. He is sort of numb. Mashim did better job with Gray and Juvia. Sakura could never do what Juvia did for Gray. Become warmth that unfroze his heart. Naruto is like Juvia. Sometime I think Sasuke would have been happier with Naruto.
Still was interesting read.

HAPPY ENDING PLEASEif it isn’t already, or at least a happy ending sequel? I was reading the reviews and I’m scared the ending is gonna be heartbreaking and i dunno if I can handle ... this story so beautiful

...some people are saying sasuke didn’t deserve it when he’s the one that was basically ruining Sakura? The fuck? I haven’t even read the entire thing and I’m pissed off

Wonderful story
I was disapointed not to find the squel '
Hopeful for ur comebk (?)

Yikes..

I love your brain! Thanks for the great story.

I like I like.

Hola éste es mi primer comentario esta historia es fantástica espero con ansias la secuela.

Consequences, anyone?
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