Loved this!

I loved it! The vampire part was also very interesting and you wrote Lucien really well.

Wow! I am thoroughly impressed. Like another reviewer mentioned, Lana being a vampire adds an interesting element. And I love how the verbiage you use to describe the sexual acts taking place is clear, but not overly clinical or fanciful. I don't care for a lot of erotica because the graphic description of sex acts just tends to be awkward, but you handled it EXTREMELY well. Lana being a virgin is also very interesting; the dichotomy of her being a skilled, bloodthirsty killer, yet extremely shy and naive in the way of sex makes her real. I'm actually reading your longer Lucien/OC story right now, and I'm really enjoying it too. :)

o.0
I can never pass up a Lucien smut. Damn. Avoiding all the obvious comments about the hotness, I liked that Lana was a vampire. It kind of made the whole situation more believable- giving her a reason to touch him when he cut himself, allowing him to be seduced in the Dracula-like sexy haze vampires create, and creating intimacy between the two with the feeding.

Well, more believable and hotter, apparently. *re-reads*