Ahhhhhh I love this story was so excited when I saw an update. She is one of the best OC ever written seriously!

Ahaha this story so far is great! I love your OC and the characters are wonderfuly developed. Rum is goofy but deadly and you got his character spot on. I'm enjoying the backstory before storybrook it really builds the right relationship. When Rum finds out about hook in the future hopefully it wont turn him against her. He seems the type to act possesive or violent when it comes to people being taken from him. The slow build is great even if their both in firm denial.

Hope to read more soon.

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LOKIson. Ok I’ll calm down now XD

This OC is wonderfully developed and three-dimensional, and Rumple is very much in-character. Well done!

This is the best story I’ve come across in a while.

Can't wait for more!

please update this story soon! please!

Can't wait to read more I REALLY want to know what's in the box!

woooh… loving this; Davy Jones, Kraken, a chest, a locker–brilliant :)

Can't wait for more!

aww I love the story! I can't wait for the next one... by the way I loved reading the extra bit especially when Mr Gold has a pet...and kept on mentioning Purina lol
Will you be continuing with the next chapter of the story? I know how real life can be a bit hectic xD

Ooh, I wonder where this is going. So excited! Keep calm and write on!

Graham is so adorable! As is Ellyn, saying she's not a mum when she's doing a great job.
He reminds me of that time I found a jellyfish as a kid... *grabs snotty thing* mommy we must save it! Whatever this strange blob is!

*que epic doomed to fail quest to save already dead jellyfish* T.T

"He's six and you sparkle." I LOVED that line! I laughed very hard when I read it. I like this story! When is it going to hop to Storybrook?!