AWWWWWWW! Love da fluffy angst.

Their relationship was broken, and that was the fault of both of them.

These poems make me feel so bad for them.

HEEEE-LLOOO :D soooo, Nano Wrimooo... I was gonna do that (or at least when you told us about it I was like, "yez, going for it,") ...but i haz no ideas. None. Well, one fanfic idea, but I think NW is meant for originality... Either way I want to get the fanfic written so might as well use that. OH and (now I'm babbling feel free to skip if ur busy) I wrote that thing, the nightmare thing that I imagined up from Uncle Gobber, but it's lame. Like, really lame. (sobs in a dark corner) ...I'll try and revise it some, but perhaps I'll just send it to you on tumblr. Oh- grr, the fanmail function has a word limit... Oh! I can put it DA. On my journal. An existing journal, where no one will be alerted when it's put there. Muahaha. (Did I tell you my tumblr? IDK. It's MidnightDragonRiders. I share it with my friend Aryn, who on here is called Fritz96). And since I'm blurbing on this review, might as well tell you I LOVED the new chapters in TBLTWYLM! :D yep. aaaaand If you're still reading then I've wasted enough of your time, but good luck with NW and everything and OH this story that I am currently reviewing on was good too, love the alliteration, you really have a way with words anyhoozle I am a nut anyway bye! (takes huge breath)
RazPaz
PS (I know, I'm sorry) YOU WERE HICCUP FOR HALLOWEEN AHHH WONDERFULNESS! I was- wait for it- A SUPERHERO'S SECRET IDENTITY. ...basically I dressed no differently than normal. BUT if you think about it, it does work! I'm the only one who knows about my costume/identity- eh? (you are face palming right now I know it) WELL EXCUSE ME NOT EVERYONE CAN BE A DECENT HICCUP FOR HALLOWEEN. Like, I spose I could be a female Hiccup, If I got a helmet and a tunic and a vest and a metal foot. And like THAT's gonna happen, I am the worst procrastinator ever...
OK I'M DONE NOW I SWEAR

They don't really have something to talk about, though, do they? It's just an illusion.

How is it that whenever I read this story I feel like spouting off metaphors and poetic descriptions and turns of phrase?

Incredibly powerful ! That's really a great portrayal of Hiccup's inner fears !

Well, we all knew Hiccup can think fast.

They didn't really have a relationship. They cared, but neither showed it, or even knew how to show it.

I feel stupid, I can't make out the meaning of such an Amazing work DX I think I'll read it again XD

Again, good poem

This right here is the reason you are my favorite HTTYD author and one of my all time favorite authors on this site. From what I have read you are one of the only authors that address the family issues between stoick and hiccup. I have to say you are one of the Legdonary authors of this site. This is amazing along with all of you stories. Also if you know any other authors that even come close to you please tell me because if I know you like them I know that they are amazing. In all the fandoms I read you are one of the Legdonary authors. You are amazing.

AHHH YES I HAVE EARNED A NICKNAME!
and also HOORAY THANK YOU! ehehehe I'm so exciteddd! I'm occupied till Tuesday with a horribly long and tedious econ project (muffled sobs) ...but as soon as it is turned in and done with I shall focus on writing that up! EEEE ANGST (I feel so... like... evil... but like... happy...Is this how it feels, to write angst? O.O I MUST DO IT MORE OFTEN)
:D *all the hugs*
-RazPaz ;D

Not bad.

You're doing such a great job with Hiccup's relationship with his father ! and I agree, we mustn't see it as black or white, it's not Stoick/wrong on one side and Hiccup/right on the other. It's more complicated than that, just as in real life, it's always double-sided. It's so interesting to get deep into this !

Dammit, that was amazing. Well done