| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Order of the Dragon |
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   Spazzman29 chapter 7 . 5/29 I know this fic is long abandoned but i have to say it feels more like a summary of events than an actual story. None of the characters have any personality since there are scenes with them being fleshed out and conversations seem to be either missing or glossed over. |
| OmniViceUser chapter 14 . 1/27 A nice Story so far, but its held back by a few things, mainly that it feels like you are in a great Hurry to finish it as soon as you can. That became most apperant in how you handled Pansy at the end of Ch.9, but is a red Line that is feelable from the Start. The Time between Pansy becoming a "No-Name" and her becoming Pansy Potter whas what, 20 Sentences? That was far to quick. You gave us readers no real Chance of getting invested in the Situation, you showed a Problem, and then you solved near immideatly, which resulted in a feeling that the whole Deal was not something worthwhile. Also, you are not really developing the Relationships between the Charackters, mainly Harry and his Wifes. I really think you should re-write the former Chapters, if you are willing to finish this Story at all that is. |
| LukeCastellan291 chapter 14 . 1/13 The house of malfoy is a noble house from France. They were not in Britain long enough to be considered ancient. The potters, bones, greengrass and longbottom were some ancient houses(though I'm not sure about greengrass) |
| Banshee-024 chapter 14 . 7/6/2019 Lmao, Its obvious the mudblood is Hermione Granger |
| edhuff chapter 8 . 5/15/2019 You need to proof read! You have Two #3's and do NOT give task instructions. |
| Redwing1co chapter 13 . 3/8/2019 Great story and character development and interactions hope to read more of this story |
| thomaspheasant chapter 14 . 9/30/2018 please update immediately |
| ZERO120 chapter 1 . 8/29/2018 story's dead just move on I hate to say it but they ain't going to update |
| jellocaptain chapter 14 . 8/11/2018 Can't wait for the next chapter in this book. Been reading all day and I'm so interested in your unique little story! |
| Dennis Wayne Daugherty chapter 14 . 7/31/2018 Please update soon i love this story please updates |
| Jacob Phantom chapter 14 . 7/14/2018 Please update your story soon! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2018 Good Good |
| fallondyson chapter 14 . 12/26/2017 PLEASE UPDATE ON THIS STORY SOON PLEASE |
| Korin Dragoon chapter 12 . 8/28/2017 Upon arriving at Potter manor Harry went to the hall of portraits and walk up to the one of Robert Potter and said "Grandfather the sleeping Dragoon had been tickled. Assemble the Order we have work to do." A grin spread across Robert Potter's face before he gave Harry a nod and walked out of his portrait. Harry then turned and headed to the Order's armory to meet up with the others, they had training to do. |
| InfinityMask chapter 14 . 4/30/2017 I quite enjoy this story.. though it was so canon! I kinda hope there would be more different in plot.. So Hermione become spy on Dumbledore urging huh? |
