Reviews for Of Metal and Sweat
stepstate chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
That was hott and has left me with the sudden urge to cut my thumb. :D
Tomte Mushroom chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
3
superfelix chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
OMG, he has her thumb in his mouth...this is sexy as hell.

How can Carol hold it together? HOW?

A thousand curses whispering into his brain...brilliant line.

Wow, what a situation!
what evil lurks chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
delicious.
pugster20 chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
crazy HOT!
El chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
If I had some way of speaking right now I would tell you how much I lovedddd thissss. Holy shit. I can't with the feels. You. Are. Awesome. Period. End of sentence. Off to die now.
adelicateflower08 chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Whew! This was short but highly erotic! I feel the need for a cigarette haha!
Pat83 chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Wow...pure perfection in 709 words! Thank you!
The Readers Muse chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHERNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG!

*dead*
Merle's Right Hand chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
And I'm dead. Feel like I need a damn cigarette! Whew!
serpetinefire chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Wow! This one has got my vote!