I only read up to the beginning of chapter 2, but you are having serious problems establishing your settings in a natural and interesting way.

Read and study this story, and what it does wrong: . .

Eru getting a pick-me-up/pep-talk from Branimir and also revealing a bit of how the Organization works... chapter may be short, but can also be arguably important to plot. Keep up the good work. :)

so far pretty good
scratch that, AMAZING
but ditch the irisu x hotarou thing, i just wanna puke when that stupid paring come up
ERU X HOTAROU FTW PPLE
yeaaaaa, keep on updating!

How long are you going to keep us hanging? :l Nevertheless, Awesome fic. PLEASE DO KEEP IT UP. PLEASE.

(this is the second time I post this, please ignore the first one, I forgot to login before commenting -.-)
OMG it was such an amazing detail to add phrases in spanish _ Everything was very well writen, but when she asked if he was worried, you practically called him a girl xD in spanish we use gender depending on who we are talking to, so if an adjective ends with an "o", it refers to a male, and if it ends with an "a", it refers to a female, so he was "preocupado", with the "a" at the end he would become a she xD Also, with questions, in english you only have a mark "?" at the end, but in spanish we have one at the beginning as well "¿" -which applies for exclamations, too ("¡!"), so it'd be like this if you want to correct it: "¿Estabas preocupado?" Other than that, it was perfect :D I just wanted to explain that to you in case you're interested in learning a little about spanish . I learn lots of words reading this fanfic :3
Now the fangirling part:
SJDNASKFNAKFNSADKFNDJFNDJNFDSNSKDNSAK ISAAAAA! I pray to God she's alright D: I love her 3, and and and she knows a "Jun", my suspicions about Sekitani's participation behind the fact that Houtarou found Eru and has to protect her are getting bigger D: but I don't know anything xD
So, yeah, this is hitting me hard with anxiety *heavybreathing* D:
Again, sorry if I'm too annoying with my super large reviews :3
I shall remark, you're amazing at this, please keep up the awesomeness :D Thank you for the new chapter! 3
P.S. I LOVE Oreki's "whatever" jealousy xD

OMG it was such an amazing detail to add phrases in spanish _ Everything was very well writen, but when she asked if he was worried, you practically called him a girl xD in spanish we use gender depending on who we are talking to, so if an adjective ends with an "o", it refers to a male, and if it ends with an "a", it refers to a female, so he was "preocupado", with the "a" at the end he would become a she xD Also, with questions, in english you only have a mark "?" at the end, but in spanish we have one at the beginning as well "¿" -which applies for exclamations, too ("¡!"), so it'd be like this if you want to correct it: "¿Estabas preocupado?" Other than that, it was perfect :D I just wanted to explain that to you in case you're interested in learning a little about spanish . I learn lots of words reading this fanfic :3
Now the fangirling part:
SJDNASKFNAKFNSADKFNDJFNDJNFDSNSKDNSAK ISAAAAA! I pray to God she's alright D: I love her 3, and and and she knows a "Jun", my suspicions about Sekitani's participation behind the fact that Houtarou found Eru and has to protect her are getting bigger D: but I don't know anything xD
So, yeah, this is hitting me hard with anxiety *heavybreathing* D:
Again, sorry if I'm too annoying with my super large reviews :3
I shall remark, you're amazing at this, please keep up the awesomeness :D Thank you for the new chapter! 3

Ah, finally you updated! Oh, happy days! Hmm, things seem to be intensifying. And the whole flashback about not taking shortcuts was a nice glimpse in Hotarou's past. I liked it. I wonder what he will do with Loki, because it seems to me that the most logical option would be to leave the area, right? Eh, either way I look forward to what you'll have for me to read next time!

Awww I loved this, thank you so much for being back _
This is amazing, a little rest after almost being terminated by the oranization, but still, he can't be too comfortable because his friends might be in danger D: Oh, my, this is intense xD
Anyway, I LOVE Isa :3 she's so sweet
(btw do you speak spanish? it'd be nice to know what Isa says exactly c: I am Mexican, so I'm curious x3)
Again, thanks a lot! :D

NO NO NO whyyyyyy? :'( I started reading this about five hours ago, I read the reference to this in another fanfiction and you yourselve asked me to try and read it :'( Please, keep on, I really thought it was finished, and now I'm really anxious.
What will happen to my poor Houtarou?
What will Eru do?
What will Irisu do?
Why is that Loki guy so mysterious?
Why is the Organization chasing Houtarou and wanting to terminate his friends?
What do they want from him?
What is up with the CD to Houtarou?
What did his mentor mean by saying he should protect Eru? Protect her from what?
How are they related?
AHHHHHH TOO MANY QUESTIONS D': Sorry, I'm in a state of shock u.u
I really really like this fanfic, I'm not much of a sci-fi person but this... I love it...
I really hope you consider to continue with it, it's GREAT, it makes me sad that I found it too late, I see your last update was on late October, 2013... I can't believe it's been an eight-month break u.u
Anyway, you should figure out what you've caused to my poor fangirl heart xD and let me now whatever decision you make, I'm really looking forward to more of this, sorry if I'm annoying with this super comment, but I'm a fan of this fanfiction and I can't help it :) I really enjoy your job, The Reminiscence of the Classics Club and this are on my top list of Hyouka fanfics 3

Damn I'm really intrested in this story you made too bad you on a small break I do however hope you complete it be a shame to have it discontinued anyway I really like your story as it seems like the story sticks to original character while giving it a new spin in a new world can't wait for the next installment

Morbid! Oreki!
I love it!

First off all, I would like to say that this story really did catch my interest. All the mystery behind it and the hints you dropped really appeal to my sense of mystery and adventure. I genuinely enjoy your story and hope you update, and I also find it a real shame not many people reviewed for a story that seems to have so much dept into it. I also applaud you for sticking ti your own opinions for the story instead of giving into the reviewers complains or dislikes with what you are writing. Really hope you also enjoy writing the story.

what is going on!?
i am !
houtaro why are you still waiting?!go find chitanda!

there is alot going on here.
who is this roki shun guy?!

I'm liking this story so far nice job :)