Love this song. Your story was sad but it went well with the song.

For those of us feeling like a little Angst - Well done. Felicity's thoughts on Laurel mirror my own...

Oh so sad.

This just broke my Olicity heart I would love it if u would make one with a happy ending for Felicity and if not with Oliver then with someone else :)

Oh man, this is not what I expected. It hurts! :( But sometimes a good spoonful of angst is necessary and you wrote that very well.

(But after that whole lets-go-hunt-the-hood fiasco, she was fed up. She said she'd loved Tommy, and then almost immediately after that she sleeps with Oliver (she is not completely oblivious), then after Tommy dies, she blames Oliver/the Hood. She just doesn't get it, and maybe that makes her a bad person, or whatever, but that's what she thinks.)

Lol, perfectly said. I think a lot of fans are feeling the same way about her.

(He's going to break her, going to put an arrow through her heart, and she knows and she'll let him do it anyway.)

Oh that line, my heart. Ouch. Maybe one of the most poetic and chilling lines I've read regarding the fear of how he'll hurt her. I wanna frame that and hang it on my wall even though its such a painful line, it's a beautiful one.

Great writing! Hope to read more from you! Maybe something happy to make up for this ;) Nice job. Have a great Friday!

WTF! Really you want to make me cry at work. That is just cruel. It was a really good story. Sad that she got her heart broke. Make Oliver pay! I really hope you do.

What is it was all of this angst going into the weekend. It is still written well, but this is the 2nd story like this. So sad!

I'm a sucker for angst, and you didn't disappoint.
I just hoped that she'd make him pay a little for breaking her heart...

Well done. Thanks for sharing.

Damn it oliver! R u stupid or what?! Why r u doing this to felicity?!