OMG WHY I JUST JEE THIS STORY RECENTLY? AAAAAA IT'S SOOO PERFECT, Waiting for the next

Je viens de finir de lire votre histoire,
J'aimerais tellement une suite

Now correct me if I'm wrong, and please let me be wrong, but did Fushimi just basically say he was going to impregnate Yata when she is suffering the affects of mind altering drugs. Like you made Yata sound like she wanted it in earlier chapters and all, but did she really if she was drugged? How is this not gonna be rape? She won't really be able to consent. It would be like if she was drunk. Please don't make Fushimi out to be that bad a guy.

So if Shou is four and just starting preschool how can he read the note already? Is he just super smart or what? Like his first scene you said he still can't talk quite right, but he can read notes and successfully escape over a wall? I could believe he snuck out the front gate or something, but a four year old making it over a wall with only some cardboard boxes?

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I'm glad we seem to be focusing on the kid again. After all six months is a long time, and it hadn't really seemed like much was being done to find him. Saru and Misaki also didn't seem to concerned. Buthow does a child go from barely being able to talk to speaking full sentences like that. I could by this guy having the power to mess with memories, and maybe even plant false ones, but that seems a bit of a sretch. I mean at most he is five right? I doubt they were keeping up with his schooling.

I worked at a youth crisis center, and I gotta say Saru sounds a lot like some of the girls' abusers. Like I get that his character is actually like this in the source material, but daamn son. Forget about setting Misaki on the right path, seek help for yourself.

Saru is a bad person. He knows Misaki is out of it right now, the doc told him so. Heknows that these are decisions that are life altering and that she doesn't have the right cognative abilities to be making them right now. Even if she did, he as Saru is so quick to point out he didn't wear a condom. He kniws she was drugged up with an aprodisiac and he still didn't use protection. Was his plan to trap Yata with a baby the whole time? I really wanna like Saru, since I like the rest of the story, but he makes it so hard.

So really not sure how I feel about Saru here. Every time I start to feel for him he does something super creepy. Like serioisly forget Yadere-chan, Saruhiko is the real sketch here.

wow, already trouble in Paradise, huh? anyways, keep making chapters. YOU ARE AWESOME!

new story! and its friday! Im feeling lucky right now v I have been waiting for new update and here it is *dancing* i cant imagine Misaki half-sister ._. I try imagine a girl with short low pigtail with nervous expression yet ita blurry in my mindseems like I need to meditate firat to read this new chapter (go imaginationº ºnice work, good luck with life oh and btw the chapter is longer yey

uwuwaahh~ update at last ٩ωو i've been waiting for this update (and other story to update) I thought it would be Saruhiko fatherﾝI could sense some disaster about her (that Oogai Aya) ԅ(﹃ԅ) oh and good job on your work, I hope i could read more ヽノgood luck on job and careful not to get sick ٩ωو

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This story is great! Please don't let it end here.

Will you ever going to update?... We all the followers of this story, believes in you.