Please come back and write more.

Wow! Esto para nada parece un final. Ahora entiendo el comportamiento de Gail

Can I ask why you didn't finish this? It's really good

Great story thus far, here's to hoping you will return to this story and finish it up!

Hooked please keep writing.

Omg hope they're all okay well you know not dead

Ohhhhh serious cliffhanger...

Ok, wait... you can't just stop now! That's cruel.
Thanks very much for your work.

Really hope shots 1 and 3 came from Gail.

Not bad

wow I guess Holly is probably regretting wanting to know what's wrong with her girlfriend, but she loves that woman too much to let her suffer in silence...but how will holly help her gail, hmm this shall be interesting
in the next chapter if you must continue telling us what happened can it please have a holly and gail talking, interacting just something
but i trust you and your writing style, update soon

I like that you have left each chapter so far with a tease...im definately on the edge of my seat waiting for more. From the hints you have given i have an inkling where this is going and im more than willing to go along with it! I hope Gail realises Holly is there to hold her hand through it

Stairs into the darkness? Gail may not be as tough as she makes everyone believe but it does take quite a bit to disturb her that much. So I'm really worried what's down there. At least Holly's there for her.
More please!

Ohhhh I'm worried...love it

First Gail/Holly fic I've read..so far I like it..keep going!