| Reviews for Dawn With No Chorus |
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hurryupandwait chapter 11 . 11/25/2013 Loved this! Loved Uhura daring Jim not to die again and the scene with Scotty and Jim was funny, alive-pitch perfect. I also loved the McCoy and Jim scene where they're working through what happened. Especially like McCoy's ". . .my friend the madman who fixes warp cores with his bare hands." Loved the quiet scene in engineering between Sulu and Jim where Jim admits he fixed the core by kicking it into place and Sulu suggest robotic arms as a measure to cut future problems off at the pass. Lot of real, human, grounded moments as these characters deal with extraordinary events. Thanks for beautifully filling the space between Jim's waking up and the one year memorial. |
wotumba1 chapter 11 . 11/20/2013 good stories, like them all |
wotumba1 chapter 9 . 11/20/2013 paperwork... who doesn't love it? ;-) |
wotumba1 chapter 7 . 11/20/2013 LOL convincing spock? good work! |
wotumba1 chapter 6 . 11/20/2013 yeah, i guess he's right, she will have to wait in line ;-) |
DLB48 chapter 5 . 10/29/2013 Not sure how I missed this fic when you posted it, but I am enjoying it immensely. Yes, it's been done before, but everyone has a different take and I venture to guess that we all feel cheated by the film jumping over all this good character development/interaction/angst. You have a good handle on all the main characters and present very realistic reactions from each to their captain's actions and subsequent death and rebirth. |
TOSoldtimer chapter 11 . 10/27/2013 This is far and away the best aftermath to STID story I've read. Thanks! |
royalpinkdogs chapter 1 . 10/24/2013 First-your ID is marvelous! Niobium is a beautiful element and the story behind its name is interesting. I'd love to know the story behind your choice of it as ID. Second-This is one of the best expositions of the 'interregnum' following STID and preparing for "whatever we get next" and I am eager to get on with the rest of this! THANKS FOR WRITING IT! |
GSFan01 chapter 11 . 10/24/2013 Very nice, I'm enjoying every chapter...thanks for posting! Your great! |