Just adorable. I love your story.

I hope you are doing okay. I really enjoy this story.

Le gasp! Dost mine eyes deceive me? I see a hint of Loki/Lena at the end. Me'sa wonder if it will survive knowing what Loki did to NY.

Hmmm, I'm undecided on Luke. He seems on the up and up, but, again, what will he do if he figures out who Loki really is. DOOM!

Pip is awesome. I love how sweet she is and how she accepts Loki ad he is.

Just discovered this story because I follow you now, and I would like to tell you that it is soooo good! Loki's lostness on Earth contrasts nicely with his Asgardian way of figuring things out, and Lena and Pip are very, very kind. I'll definitely be reading from here onwards!

So very incredibly happy this fic is back. Also so very happy you are getting better.

This a great story and for the first time ever i actually like the OC. So please continue it's really great and i am dying to know what will happen.

Tam: *glares* I still don't like Odin.
Lena: *soothes* Give him a chance. Maybe it really is for Loki's good.
Tam: *snorts* Sure. Right. And there are pigs flying outside my window right now.
Lena: *frowns* Tam...
Tam: *sighs* Fine. He 'might' be trying to help Loki. Might being the big word there.
Lena: *smiles* See?
Tam: *grumbles* Still don't have to like him...
Lena: *gives tea* One step at a time.
Tam: *narrows eyes* Pussy.
Lena: *chuckles*

1) Oooo, more backstory on Lena. I like where this is going. Charlie, huh? I hope Loki can find and aid him in getting back to Ginny. This poor family needs some good news.

2) Grrr...fine, maybe Odin's got a plan (this time...cause we all know that other one was bad from the start), but that's all I'm conceding. *pouts*

Thanks for updating this. :D

Tamuril2

Love this little slice of Loki's new life, and can't wait to see what happens next. Will Charlie ever be found again?

Tam: *smiles* What a sweet chapter.
Lena: *blinks* Sweet? We're being chased, Loki's having a minor meltdown, and all you can think of is 'sweet'?
Tam: *shrugs* I can't control the far ranges my mind takes.
Lena: *scoffs* Sure. Right.
Tam: *smirks* Like you're one to talk, Miss. Oh-I'm-So-Average-And-Nothing.
Lena: *glares* Watch it.
Tam: *giggles* You're fun when you're mad.
Lena: *sighs* Just review. Pip's waiting to have a hot cocoa tea party with you and Loki.
Tam: *gasps* I totally forgot. *goes to review*

1) Poor Loki. I'm glad he's finally getting what his actions caused, but still...the poor guy. I hope he'll be able to find someone to help him with this realization. I think it'll make him a stronger, better, wiser person in the long run.

2) Pip, Pip, thou smart girl. Your enemies are going to tremble in fear when you get older.

3) Lena, ordinary? Sure, but that's what makes her so memorable. Not just any ordinary person would do this for a homeless guy they just met.

Yay for another chapter. I enjoyed it (but then, when have I not enjoyed your chapters?). Can't wait for more. :D

Tamuril2

Yay, more Pip! I love Pip! Are the bad guys going to target her in an attempt to make Loki do what they want? And why try to kidnap him when they just think he's a homeless dude? Why not offer money (even if they don't pay)?

great fanfic please update soon thanks

Tam: *grins* Ooooo, nice.
Clint: *sighs* This is going to be an...interesting...review.
Tam: *nods* True, true.
Tony: *blinks* Huh? It is? But why?
Tam: *giggles*
Clint: *groans* See? She's already lost to us.
Bruce: *shrugs* Least she's not gotten into her chocolate yet.
Clint: *shivers* Yeah.
Tam: *pouts* You're all meanies...big meanies.
Tony: *hugs her* But you love us anyway.
Tam: *smiles* Too true.

1) Phew, Loki got away...or has he? *cues dramatic music* DUM, DUM, DUUUMMMM! Charles doesn't come off as the type of person who will give up easily. *grins* But Loki's got his belt and Lena's got the mace, so...all we need now is Darcy with her tazer and Charles'd be toast.

2) I fear for Pip. Charles (even though I don't know his full power yet) could use her to get to Loki.

All in all, a great new chapter. Thanks for posting it so quickly.

Tamuril2

I'm glad Loki escaped! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Tam: *frowns* I think there was a foreshadowing in there somewhere.
Ginny" *snorts* You think?
Tam: *pouts* It's not my fault I'm too tired to fully grasp it.
Ginny: *looks smug* Keep telling yourself that, dear.
Tam: *smiles WAY too nicely* Just keep in mind as well that I'm the writer here.
Ginny: *gulps*
Tam: *smirks* Thought so. *settles back* Here's my review, Pickwick12.

1) Hmmm, I wonder how Loki's going to do with this engineering job. *grins* Will he be meeting a certain genius, billionaire, playboy, philanthropist? *nudges* Eh, eh?

2) Sooo...what's the deal with the AER? I must be super tired because I feel like this should really mean something to me, but it's not. If you want to drop any clues they'd be much appreciated.

All in all, it's coming along spectacularly (really it is). I can't wait to read the next chappie.

Tamuril2

Tam: *blinks* How'd I miss all these new chapters?
Lena: *pats her on the shoulder* Well, to be honest, your computer WAS freaking out until now.
Tam: *ponders* True...true...
Lena: *smiles* I'm sure Pickwick12 will more than understand.
Tam: *perks up* Yeah! *grins* Review time then!

1) Ooo, Pip knows the truth now. I must admit, I was a tad worried when Loki took off with her and semi interrogated her knowledge of the subject. But, phew, it all worked out...though how Lena didn't miss Loki snatching up her daughter so abruptly is beyond me.

2) Aw, Lena's got such a good heart. I just know she'll be able to help Loki out (both with the job and by being a friend).

3) Tehe. The whole open admiration of Loki makes me giggle. Just imagine if Loki actually came to our universe. All he'd need to say is a few "mewling quims" and "kneels" and the fangirls would be leading the frontal attack for his army.

Well, I'm off to read the last chapter. See ya in a few minutes!

Tamuril2