I love your twist on them together. True to the BBC characters. Well done.

This is so lovely. I actually kinda love overbearing Mycroft trying his best to protect his little brother despite the unorthodox methods he use. Sherlock is so on point, especially when he began pointing out all the evidences they unintentionally left for Mycroft to find and John is just sweet.
I rather like the line: "who do you suppose taught me?" in regards to Sherlock's skills. There's something brotherly about that.
Thank you for writing!

Really great piece
Thank you so much for sharing

Okay, so I love how you managed to keep John and Sherlock in character, even though it was a Johnlock. Most people can't, but this was excellent! This story was and is amazing! :D

This was fantastic. You captured their voices and speech patterns very well. And the humor ...