Reviews for The Birth of a King
Guest chapter 14 . 5/11/2018
I've been on edge all the way from chapter 1. Amazing, please, this ride has been great!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2017
I just wanna say I don't know what's going on... Nothing is clear... Who is the red king?
KingOfEternity chapter 14 . 5/25/2016
maybe i would but mikoto would still be a better king
creativesm75 chapter 14 . 1/23/2016
cool
I'm a Coffee Bean chapter 14 . 5/22/2015
YES! I WOULD GLADLY TAKE HIS HAND! FLAMING OR NOT!
I'm a Coffee Bean chapter 13 . 5/22/2015
Gawd! This is beautiful! Truly beautiful! I was teary eyed at the end. Actually, I was trying to hold back my tears. SaruMi fics need more love!
Kaoru Yukina chapter 14 . 11/29/2014
the walk is rough... but the ending ia beautiful...
love it. XD
juther chapter 10 . 5/3/2014
hhehehe that simile about lions made me laugh because i just learned that lions are commonly homosexual XD
Guest chapter 14 . 4/17/2014
AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING. OK BRB TIME TO READ ALL YOUR OTER FANFICS
beaniek4 chapter 14 . 4/12/2014
I loved thia story all the way through! Great job! XD
sereneskydragonslayer chapter 14 . 4/12/2014
Lots of hearts for these two awesome characters! yata and fushimi!
it was a great ending :) I love how they finally came to terms with the fact that fushimi is the red king. LOL, its pretty hilarious when fushimi's like "I still work for scepter 4..."
Well, Mikoto is actually more lazy than fushimi I think since fushimi still works for scepter 4 but mikoto was still an awesome king! Hmm...I think all red kings will be lazy in the future...that would be nice..
I really like how the story ended with friendship...not love. Even after reading yaoi, I still haven't 100% accepted the very idea of yata x fushimi although I have read quite a few fanfics with their pairing and liked it...:3
awesome story!
Kelalexshipper chapter 14 . 4/12/2014
Holy craaaaaap. That was the most adorable amazing perfect gorgeous fluffyish glittery ending ever. I flipping love you so much right now, even though I'm sad that it ended, and Gah. I don't even know anymore. All I know is that this was amazing and after I finish typing this comment I'm gonna favorite it.
A-Ghost-Named-Calamity chapter 13 . 4/10/2014
Bravo! Bravo! Encore! I loved this, it was amazing! Please oh please post the epologe soon! You really do write awesome :)
I loved it and please continue! And as a request, hmmm well, i just want to see more sarumi interaction! :D maybe somthing were theyre not exactly fighting and mayybbeee (perhaps im pushing it too far?) something where they're actually getting along a bit at least? Domestic life would just be wow, i had to throw that out there.
sereneskydragonslayer chapter 13 . 4/10/2014
awwwwww I think they just made up so nicely... that was so sweet...their bond is so perfect...*sighs in happiness*
Kelalexshipper chapter 12 . 3/23/2014
Awww.. I don't want it to end.. ;; And maybe, so it doesn't end on 13 chapters, add an epilogue. 13 is bad luck after all. *Jokes* It might cause a year's worth of writer's block or something.
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