While I greatly enjoy this... If I'm being honest it feels unfinished to me. Hopefully you will write some more to bring it to a proper ending.

I wish there was more!

Great story. Wish that someone would’ve returned during New Moon and saw how Bella was and helped her. Although I am an Edward/Bella fan, Edward really got off too easy with Bella forgiving him so quickly. The family forgiving Edward, also. Charlie was no help at all here. Talk about absentee father. Bella could’ve died while he was off fishing all weekend again!

*mumbling in the background* Why am I crying, its just a stupid story, nothing to get so worked up about.

I absolute love this, it's so sweet. I am interested in a chapter or two of emmet and jasper versus Edward or something. Haha

More please

i seem to have read something very similar to this. it was full story couple hundred thousand word. sure would love to see where this would go.

Go jasper! So glad he got to her in time and was able to help. Wish it was longer but I guess that was a good place to end it. What was wrong with Charlie acting like that?

Awesome.

Please update soon I'm in love with this book !

Humm. Good thought process. Could be refined into a longer story. Love your writing as always!

I really, really like this story, but there's just one part that drives me crazy, so I thought I'd share how it's done. IV lines aren't removed just because the patient is moving. Once you get a good vein and the catheter goes in, you do everything to preserve the site. If the patient is tugging at the line, it's taped down a couple of lengths so it doesn't tug at the catheter. If the patient has to go somewhere that the bag cannot be carried to, the line is unhooked from the catheter, but the catheter is never taken out unless it either blows and a new site is needed, or the doctor decides it is no longer needed (which is usually right before they let you out of the hospital, even if they haven't needed to use it for a day or two). If a bath is needed, the catheter is covered and kept out of the water, but usually if you're that sick, it's a bedbath for you. Taking a regular bath drains your energy, even if you're helped. And that's my soapbox. Thank you for your time!

Awesome story!

This story is really good! I do hope you can update it soon! I'd love to know what happens next! :) :)

Add more just two chapters is not fun for a story