SO CUTE!

That last line. Damn. Awesome stuff.

I wish that I had found this fic earlier because this fulfills so many of my favorite little things about this couple!

With Yuzu, it's so exceptionally her and so cute that she acts like each kiss is her first kiss. This is such an adorable thing to picture, and I'm only on the second sentence of this fic, but I'm already in love. 333 Thank you for just this entire mental picture. (Would this count as a headcannon? Yuzu acts like a dork all the time because she's constantly flustered by Mei; but if so, then this sits right at the top of my favorite Citrus headcannons!)

This entire concept is so sweet because it hinges on the fact that Mei hasn't known true affection prior to Yuzu, and you do such a wonderful job of explaining this. What is even more impressive to me, is that you have managed to subvert the meaning of "power." Kisses are no longer purposefully used to subdue Mei (or for Mei to use to subdue Yuzu); now, Yuzu unknowingly has a kind of "power" over Mei with her kisses and affection - which is so bizarre because Yuzu doesn't want to have power over Mei. She just wants to love her. But Mei interprets all this as a type of power because that's what she is used to when it comes to "love." You've done such an amazing job explaining this in just 600 words!

(I apologize if I've interpreted this incorrectly! How you have explained all of this is so incredibly well done and so intricate and detailed, all over this single word, and I love it!)

The ending feels bitter sweet to me because Mei still has this view, as though she doesn't deserve this affection (or something along those lines) - otherwise she would not feel as thought Yuzu needs to "come to her senses." It's like... No, Mei, Yuzu has come to her senses already, and those senses tell her that she loves you. I might be wrong, but I take it that these ideas stemmed from where the manga was during October 2013 (around chapter 6?), and I assume that this is the kind of mindset that Yuzu and Mei had at the time. And given this, the ending quote just fits so wonderfully because Mei does not come to realize real affection until much later. I love your take on Mei's thoughts and views during this time period. (Sorry if this sounds a bit rambly, haha, but I truly do love how you've gone about characterizing them! It's perfect for this period of the manga!)

And I absolutely love your writing - and this was written in 2013? I can't wait to read more of your stuff because I'm excited to see how your writing has managed to get better than this already-wonderful writing! Thank you for writing this fic because I truly enjoyed reading it. It was incredibly sweet and so detailed over this one concept. :)

Very nice story, Angel! Will others come soon? Hope so.

loved the last line.

none just always the same thing i always thought...

This was great! Short and sweet.

Great fic! I loved it :3

It's so fluffy I could die happy now *o*

Thank you!

I love how you portrayed Mei. I think I finally understand her. Thanks!

Awesome */*

amazing

Just absolutely melts. You are quite simply the BEST Citrus writer around. Hands down :)

I loved this!

Thank you so much for writing it :)

Ahhhhh! This was so cute! The things your fanfics does to my poor heart T-T