Great story, gonna read the sequel now! :D

Lots of delirius love,

ERREREER

one word to sum up this story 'beautiful' tnx x

*.* SO CUTE! this was such a good story... so good and angsty x3 even if the original ending was bit better... I laughed almost 10 minutes straight at the thought of shadi in pizza man clothes and a pizza in handXD

yay...love it!

Lol at the alternate ending... XD XD

OMG this was so cute! Love the scar thing, very fluffy and made me shed a tear or two~~ *Is tempted on reading the sequel*

Why haven't I been writing reviews to these chapters, and yet I read the whole story? Oh, well, better late than never right? I liked the whole story. I guess I was so sucked into the story that I forgot to review. That's good thing right?

ah, yes. i can see it now... shaadi: former guardian of the mill. items has accepted the job offer of becoming a pizza boy - err man, i mean. oh my golly becheebiya! wat hav u don 2 yugi! nah, i like y/b even more than yy/y. actually, i'm startin to hate dat pairin ya know? well, anywayz, i hope u make more of these 'cuz u rarely see too much. note the 'too much' part. n.-!

lol... shadii WAS the pizza man _ funny...

I don't see why Yugi doesn't like the ending..I don't think it could have been more perfect! Of course through this whole story I had to keep reminding myself to breathe...this story should rate a 100 out of 10

BSR:Grr! Who took my panty hose? Yami Red? YR:Don't look at me! BSR:Well then who-*gasp*! BA-KU-RA! Why did you take my-my-my panty hose! *bursts into laughter* Bakura:I didn't take 'em I "borrowed" them. YR:You borrowed them with no intention of bringing them back. Bakura:Exact-HEY! I was gunna give 'em back! YR:I bet. Bakura:Ok I did steal them! But for a good cause! BSR:Ok *gasp* what *giggle* cause *bursts back into laughter*? Bakura:*mumbles* YR:I can't hear you. Bakura:FOR RYOU'S BITHDAY! OK? BSR:*laughs even harder if possible* YR:*busts into fits of laughter with her light* Bakura:To the Shadow Realm with you! YR&BSR:*glance at eachother and continue laughing* Bakura:I give up!*walks away with panty hose,wrapping paper,ribbons,tape,and-uh oh-scissors!* YR:Oh no! Did he have scissors? 'Scuse me hikari! Bakura! You're breaking Ryou's no scissors ever rule!*runs after Bakura* BSR:Well,it's a great fic! Keep up the good work! EP!*ducks as a pair of scissors come flying straight for her head* Whoa! Bakura:*walks into the room bruised and with a little blood trail from the corner of his mouth to the bottom of his chin* This was my best shirt!*holds oout shirt-well what's left of it* YR:*a couple rip in her highly slitted white dress-not too high and no rips in inappropreate spots* Well,that'll teach you to never use scissors! Bakura:Hmph! *Ryou walks in* YR,Bakura,&BSR:Happy Birthday Ryou! Ryou:Thanks! Bakura:*runs up to Ryou and gives him the torn but amazingly still wrapped present* OPEN IT! Ryou:*opens it and tears well up in his eyes* Just what I've always wanted! *holds panty hose up to himself to see if they're his size* YR,BSR,&Bakura:*burst into uncontrollable laughter and roll on the floor clutching their stomachs* Ryou:*runs away in tears because we huwt Wyou's poow wittwe feewings!* Announcer Type Guy Person(ATGP):We would like to inform you that the reviewer Blood Shed Red,did this for humor purposes and did not mean to bring anger to Ryou fans because she herself is a Ryou fan. Ryou:Didn't anger anyone my ass! *lunges at ATGP* Nice fic keep it up!

I LOVE this story! I wish I could keep these cliffhangers comging...I can write with emotion though!

No! You're absolutley TERRIFIC at writing! I would just love to read the sequel! (in a sing-songy voice) I know who XXangel is!

The chapters may be short. but not as short as Yugi!

haha *is laughing still* he shadi ha ha man shadi that was the best, *hides8me no order pizza any more, shadi scares me more then yugi and pegusus put together i like your story cute i dun like him but what happened to the migit? oh well not important *hides behind her yami looking suspiciosly for shadi trying to kill her*

stop complaining it's plenty long an really good!