Finally finished reading this epic. Thank you so much for sharing this piece with us. It was super fun and you’re right, your writing really did improve throughout this piece. The characterizations are great and the premise is consistently hilarious. Again, thank you for sharing. If the mood ever strikes you I would love to see more of the book itself!

Damn this was good

I love this story so much! I have just discovered this a few days ago and binged read it until now. Your quality of writing have improved so much from the very beginning until the end (not that it was bad before!). You portrayed Miraak well and Malvina has a very interesting and well developed character. Will you write more about her in your other stories? It would be interesting to know about her past before she became the hero of Tamriel, or how she acquired her other titles.
I hope you will post another epilogue for this story, but for now I'm definitely checking out The Bride Wore Red!

Cheers

Loved it!

Fantastic finale, the verbal battle of wills rather than physical altercation, the end result exactly what I was hoping for.
It is a little surprising for Mora voluntarily to bow-out and relinquish victory based on a technicality, although he probably is planning and plotting right at this very moment ...

Really great ending! I love this whole story :)

That was so funny xDDD "That was meant to illustrate the ridicule of our situation. Never thought that reality could compete with fiction" that almost got me (and the chair I am seated on right now) backwards right down to the floor.

A tiny typo you've got here: shire. It's shrine.

I like this Epilogue very much, especially with Miraak fed up of reading the blasted book eleven times in a week and Malvina later saying that if he is up to piss off Mora again xDDD But, BUT... if you're up to writing more stuff (some years later... with Miraak being a consecrated smut-writer and Malvina having a full library of books that sets her on fire muahahahahaha! Who knows? Maybe Miraak would have his well-deserved place in History... as a smut-writer and ACTUALLY being famous for it) I'll gladly read it and, thusly, comment on it. Hell, if you wanna more opinion on your story I would go to lengths like reviewing each chapter, for I've discovered that each chapter has its own priceless sentences xDDD

Thank you for this!

Pretty good story. The Romance is done quite well and an epilogue would finish it off quite well.

Fantastic chapter. And yes, a sequel would be be lovely.

I would love to see an epilogue or sequel, should that be in the works. I'm glad that Malvina got the last laugh! Mora's self righteous, writhing self can stick it in his craw! Miraak may still be bound, but at least he derives pleasure from this connection. Thank you again for such an amazing story for an often overlooked character.

Thank for writing and fnishing this story : ) I never thought that I could start caring for Miraak but, welp, here we go.

Now I kinda wish to read more of Daedric Princes complaining about mortals and making fun of Mora...

ah i didnt think of the loophole. good thinking. that gives me something to think about for my story. i would love a sequel but idk about one shots unless its a series of them where its time spent together killing stuff etc while he writs away on his next novella. would prefer them going to conquer the world in the meantime :D

For some reason the image of Lord Mora saying "I do not want to talk about it" has me in fucking stiches for says. Bravo fantastic story!

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Oh, God... I, like old Herma-Mora, didn't see that one coming! I really thought she would renegotiate the terms of the contract or something... BUT NOT THIS, hahahahahaha!

Wow, I've also felt very anxious as Mora's tentacles started to strangle Miraak, I was like "What are you waiting for, you dork?"

In addition to my awe, I must point out something: if Hermaeus Mora was the one sending those vivid dreams to Malvina... wouldn't that make him double stupid for make these two so close? I mean, face that: a woman who usually gets what she wants and a man who had literally no carnal knowledge in ten millennia... and the demon just got them tangled. Both Dragonborns.

Maybe he was expecting that Malvina would never developed such an affection for the pompous ass Miraak is... I don't know, I just feel that the demon sabotaged his own plans himself.

It has been a funny ride, truly, and I'm totally voting for that Bonus Chapter and the Second Bonus Chapter... and the One-Shot. Just don't offer me more or I will take up all the offers! I'm warning ye! xD

Thank you so much for such an enjoyable tale and for the laughs. First time I actually can picture Miraak in silly situations without feeling it's OOC.

Keep writing!

PD: wanna wanna wanna dat Bonus Chapterrrrrrrrr... wanna wanna wanna whatever you can offer in regard to this storyyyyyyyy...

I saw this on SkyrimKinkMeme and read it all there. I love this story and can’t wait for more updates :D