Só agora em 2020 encontrei sua estória...que incrível jornada! Estou impressionada com a sua capacidade de descrever tudo com riqueza de detalhes e emoção. Parabéns! Obrigada por isso.

This story has been phenomenal. Your writing was mesmerizing and I could not put it down. I read all in one day as a result. The way you wove in the letters to Steven and their flashbacks was brilliant. I am most definitely a fan and this is my favorite McRoll fic to date. Thank you for sharing your talents!

I know it’s been some time since you completed this story but I hope we get to see your world again soon.

This is my very favourite Catherine and Steve fic and would love to see you write more!

I cant' wait for the next chapter, can you please update a new one? I can't wait to see what's next on Steve and Catherine's lives. Thank you

Took me a few days to finish because of work, but I'm so so incredibly glad I found this story. Steve and Catherine are the only good coule in H50 and what they did to them on the show doesn't do the characters , and actors, justice.

I hope you'll be able to share with us a new chapter soon.

A new fan,

Kylie.

Wow- this story is amazing! Just took four days of my life to read but loved it!

Love this story so so much, I hope you update soon.

You are an excellent writer, I like how you keep Catherine and Steve together and let them handle their problem together.

Can't wait to read more of your stuff.

I absolutely LOVE this story, just read it all, took me 3 nights :).

It's amazing, the details, the consistency, keeping them in character. Just brillant work, really.

I hope to see more of it soon :)

Thank you SO much for sharing this with us.

Ohhhhhh let me just say I am so in love with this ENTIRE story. Oh I don't even know where to begin.. You should be a novelist. I read A LOT and this is right up there with some of the best published works I have read. Amazing work xxxx

I really like the flashback in North Korea and how worried they were about each other. Great job, I think that's in character.

Love all the interactions between Steve, Cath and Evan, it's utterly adorable and I can't wait to read more of it :) I love, love, love the fluff in McRollins, especially the one you write.

As usual, I love so many things about this chapter, but I can't write them all, I doubt I'd have enough characters to use lol.

Thanks you so much for writing this N, hope to read more of you soon.

Hugs,

C.

PS: Can we please get Steve in black boxer briefs soon? ;) Thank you

I'm truly sorry for having to postpone reading this story for sooooooooooooooo long since this chapter came out. Your writing is just as fabulous as usual. There were some parts that made me cry when I was on the train (I dont think the characters actually cried, yet I cried lol). I just the parallel btw the past & present, you always write a reference to what happened in the past. That's very thoughtful & continuity is what I love about your stories. Like "Wanna tell me about it" keeps appearing throughout the whole story. I just love the way you structure everything ;)

Just so you know I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeee the scene where Cath sat between Steve's legs, just like in the chapter when she flew to Hawaii to comfort him after his dad passed away.

Personally, I'm so satisfied that Chin actually seems to be closer to Cath (and Steve) more than Danny (you know how I am hehe, I'm happy that we are on the same page on this). The brother-sister comment makes me grin like an idiot. Continuity! Still remember how excited and proud I was when Cath chose Chin to be the one she talked and confided to. Awww, and Chin smoothed away Cath's tear. How sweet! I'm jumping up and down ~~~

I love the way you handle Doris too. I'm always a big fan of Doris & somehow I believe in the reason behind everything she did - just to protect her family. Thank you for giving Doris a chance to let people understand more about her & bringing her closer to McGarrett family in every story of yours. So proud!

The interraction of Steve & Cath with Emma was really, really sweet. I think I have to watch 320 again now. The moment Steve broke down, I broke down too.

Supportive Steve seems only appear on your stories these days haha. I don't even watch the show now, but I know that the current Steve sucks. I wish we all could just stay inside your story & trust you wholeheartly and not have to worry about anything else. I love Steve misunderstood that Cath wanted them to go to a couple therapy session and he's hurt. Don't know why, that tiny detail made me smile.

It's so lovely to read all the domestic scenes inside McGarrett's home. The more I read about the interraction btw Steve & Evan and Catherine & Evan, the more I want these scenes really happen before my very eyes. So heart-warming!

I expect this chapter to be so dovey-lovey, I didn't expect it to be still quite complicated, especially about An (I'm not complaining at all haha). Thanks for never letting us - your loyal readers - down! Look forward to your next fabulous chapter!

Just finished the 22nd chapter of this amazing journey. Thanks so much for sharing this story with all of us! Steve is the best version of himself when he is written by you! Their love is so real in your stories. The feelings are real... the images are real... Take as much time as you need to continue this master piece... but please keep sharing with us. Wishing all the best for you. Pipas

I check every single day to see if you have posted any continuing story or any new story so I was absolutely ecstatic to see that you had written another chapter! I selfishly never want your stories to end! It warms my heart to read about Steve and Catherine and their baby boy Evan. You've created wonderful three dimensional characters and a phenomenal storyline. The show's writers could take some lessons from you! Thank you again for all your hard work and I look forward to reading more chapters!

Well thank you for a great chapter, I really hope we won't have to wait too long for the final chapter. I have really loved this story a big thank you .