Awwwwwww my. She's just too sweet and whatever she's been through it just breaks my heart. That part with Dr. Cullen and daddy being two different people was so funny. I'm caught up in this story now. I hope some time it will be updated again.

Awwwww, poor Angel. She just can't catch a break can she? Good thing Carlisle's there. But they're not going to keep their secret forever and when they do I hope they don't get in any trouble. That falling asleep hearing the ocean was too sweet. And see there, I'm almost caught up in the story again.

Yes. I do think they are dealing with it in the best way. She's only a kid after all. I liked they didn't get mad and start yelling or anything else like that. Rather told her why they need things to be a certain way. And Angel is just a kid after all. She isn't going to be happy with everything all the time. It was sort of nice to see it.

I love how Carlisle have just named an Island Esme- like buying a whole Island. No big deal! Haha. I'm not sure how long three miles is since we have a different system- it should be about four K right? Anyway, it's not Carlisle's fault He would have done anything if he just knew. I loved the moment where Angel was being sassy towards the doctor. I never thought that an airport security could be so scary... but I'm terrified of the flying so maybe I shouldn't say anything. That was a great part anyway. poor Angel.

Oh wow. So much terrible things happened to Angel... And to Esme too. At first I started wondering if telling a little girl all of that detail was any good. Then I realized it was because Angel's been through the same kind of things. Who's the girl in the cover picture by the way? Is it just a random one from google or does it have a meaning? Wow all of that terrible... I'm so happy Angel finally is with someone who does care for her. But I do hope Carlisle doesn't kill him really. I don't think so no... he deserves to die but more he deserves to live with what he's done.

Awwwww. Poor little Angel. I know it's been forever at this story too but... Well, I already explained. Hmmmm.. well. If I couldn't sleep or was asleep or something I used to go to my mum's bed so no. Not weird. My dad also travelled a lot so I and my brother used to take turns sleeping on dad's side of the bed (I think take turns is the word) Carlisle and Esme are just so cute and so perfect and I hope Angel will feel better soon.

20. Chapter 20.
CARLISLIE POV
Meet our newest members her own eyes wwere coated wit venom shattering her eye color herself had gasp Teeth and fangs crystalized skin coated who look and felt young Alice what is tell us Call me Angela Cullen I look Six but I am thirteen years old in a Child's body I am a stinkin' Immortal child really oldest but over the hill in my rocker but really really ANCIENT! Her eye were a Falkor's Ruby Red flying shattering I am going hunting like a Vampire I am going to Aomized these critters herself was really really a spitting then OH MY GOD! Bombed her gift herself was thirsty and restless and gone into Combot drop mode te guard sighten her with red eyes with Crystalized skin coated you there who turned Immortal cjildren is not allowed TO LIVE Then blasting time ripped but split with more members with screams SHATTERING! Took each both with more our daughter gone time-Split with the three then popped from here then suddenly reported Msters she's Immortal aging far too fast has Crystal skin Red eyes is thirteen in a body of a six year old is not allowed to live is ging far too slow is ancient but old the oldest Immortal chid we bring the Carnivorous selves were as all of them exploding with three are cut from civilization blacked out mybrother brought te charring corpses are nolonger alive sthey broken our law of turning a child is from as all Alien Rattlesnakes blacked out bring tem then it was too late more carnivous selves as all of them eachboth with five more Exploding joined the Volturi were a old but ancient noble clan of Vampires wre as all of them more than as all of them EXPLODED With each five to more then too late the seer reported She heals alien but extraterrestrial is growing faster than normal she is a Half-blood of Artemis that herself uh-oh iris message monsters I am half-human and half-goddesss gasp my venom kept me alive and burns my blood all of it her own eyes went Yellow like a Ktarian child who look about Seven years old was 14 Daughter we died but her blood is Artemis's she's a half-breed like Nessie with them can't be killed by you reach 18 years old you be frozen in space/time in limbo you will be stronger faster lethal armed with powers of darkness from the moon beware you are cursed half blood daughter of Artemis will be a Assassin a slayer you will have propectic dreams while slaying and fighting for love and justice be strong daughter of the moon goddess be wise and skilled with weaponry a courage felt her body I am a half-blood going to age but grow differently but first slay some mice she was a Vampire slayer a new breed of Sailor Guardian fighting killed them was really lethal with knifes and found ancient daggers to keep herself was gifted of darkness te newspapers of a demigod of Artemis swore a lot of vows in Ancient Greek could speak write and read in Greek was too far superior more highly civilized well mannered had to throw a knife Good god kid herself was stronger three times grater than normal was a breed of Vampire fighter using combat skills loved books was rearraging everything had fits like Tomoe Hotaru while aging her hair was in a Saturnian bob looks frail but weak of blood loss something was taking over her mind we moved to Tokyo, Japan they noticed how cold I became wire a white wig wearing cursed glasses from wearing Sera myu clothes herself had a second fit was sick Dawn Read Spier who was Kaorinite she looked different oh god it's taking over me who I am Dear child I am a Vulcan your father Professor Tomoe is a Vampire take ye this crystal Thank you I feel strange Otosan's hands is cold as Okaasan's it was a fan film based on the reprinted manga herself had a propcetic dream was feeling really strange while aging but growing faster with the host she held I must find a hoste for Pharoah 90 I am Mistress 9 fear me Volturi I am inside your heads your coven murdered people fear darkness from my godly mother I am a hybrid you can't find us we are in Mugen sector give me your hostes for my master he is ruling herself Began showing powers but suddenly destroyed Didyme the Ashes by healing Marcus's pain then in a cosmic light ten suddenly her body was lifeless was wax melted away with all of the kills shredding away the gardener fled Aro someone killed her and took her life source from her and it's pieces tey forbidden s/them blacked out with each both with hybrids shattering then taken then it really happened brought in then destroyed ten was murdered then no longer there then more than as all of them it really did changed ourelves were Immortal officially for good but for real then it really happened NUKING More than as all of members ten interbreeding with humans destroyed as all of them looked youg wre ancient Vampires too lodest joined hen exploding.

I love this chapter! I love this story in general too! I laughed so hard when Angel told Esme she knew Dr. Cullen and Carlisle were the same and was just doing it for him because he was confused. :D Great work!

Aww she's so cute congrats on 100 reviews! Thanks for updating!

I know this is probably going to be weird but what if Angel the other girls in the ballet class tease Angel but there is this really loud opinionated girl in the hip hop or tap group that stands up for Angel so angel switches classes to be with her.

Thanks for updating!

LOVED IT! Great work! I love this story!

Hi! I loved this story, every chapter, every situation. In this chapter, I love talk and Carlisle put to find monsters, reminded me Monsters Inc lol. Very cute story.
I hope you update soon.
Regards!

This was such a sweet chapter. I think Carlisle and Esme are doing a really good job looking after Angel. I can't wait to read more, keep up the great work!

18.
Chapter ANEL'S POINT VIEW
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