It does work for me. I liked that the story focused on the girls trying to have a good time by telling stories. A true one of a kind story.

-DaleJr.88

a fun and sweet story. Perfect for an OCtoboer read.

Blake's last story was lights out wasn't it.

A well done story. The stories that were told from Yang, Ruby, and Weiss were amusing and showed that they didn't have that much talent in story telling. It was hilarious. Blake's stories were different and showed that she definitely read a lot and knows how to present a story. Quite chilling. It was a fun activity the four did together. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

love the stories. especially Blakes last one. Got to remember that.

Niiiiiice that scared me too Blake was awesome

Well done it worked great! And that last story that was a bit creepy I have to admit

Good one. You shoud write a sequel. :)

Wow, Blakes stories really ARE scary! * looks at light switch * I thin I'll be keeping the lights on for tonight...and maybe tomorrow, too

This was soooooo good! Even I got the 'heeby jeebies' with that last story. Good job! We need more like this. lol I even pictured that bloody scene with yang and weiss-weiss being the one...you know...and it scared and made me sad! Wow. I wish that my scary story telling in my younger years at sleepovers was as good as theirs. But we had just as much fun. :) Thank you for this. I feel like this story was the closest I got to a good scary sleepover story party. Keep up the fantastic work! -O.L. 12:38pm 11-15-13

That last part scared me a bit.

Interesting experiment. Don't know if it really works, but Weiss' reaction was worth it.
Totally had a twist at the end though, like having something written on the wall XD

I didnt like the scary stories, cos I get scared easily myself! lol But Weiss's reaction was really cute! _

Hahaha, Weiss is such a cute little tsundere! XD
Hm, that first story Blake told sounds a lot like this scary story I've once read before... Nice work!

"And none of them ever noticed the pair of eyes peeking at them from a gap in the floorboards..."
I honestly expected the story to end with something ominous like that. XD
Okay, so I need clarification. The second story Blake told. Was that original, something you made up yourself? Because not only was it legitimately creepy, something that has never, or at least hardly ever, happens for campfire stories as far as I'm concerned, but it was also fresh, as I had never heard it before. For once, it seemed unique, like a new kind of story in a world where every type was thought to have been discovered. Fantastic story here, and a fantastic story Blake told as well.