| Reviews for Frosty Shadows |
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Demi clayton chapter 2 . 10/5/2019 I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you. |
ShadowEonEclipseChaos chapter 2 . 2/19/2016 Keep up the ABSOLUTLY FANTASTIC work! More PLEASE! |
Nidias dragonoid chapter 2 . 6/20/2015 Awesome hope there's a chapter three |
happygirl3024 chapter 2 . 5/10/2015 Awesome story |
Hailey Face chapter 2 . 3/11/2015 Love it wish I had more |
Rihan K.A chapter 2 . 7/2/2014 Thanks for the effort for making a beautifull story. Mavis and Jack pairing, its rare, that's why I love reading it. Your story is quite good, just its a bit rushed, if you can expand the stroy a little bit more. Add a little plot twist maybe? An antogonist to make it interesting? Keep up the good work, will wait for your next update. |
PerrythePlatypusGirl chapter 2 . 5/30/2014 It's a cute start but it seems a littttttle rushed to me. Also, Mavis is slightly out of character here. I understand that she's supposed to be bitter here, but I honestly think that Jack and Mavis would bond more over their fun childish natures than "OMG he/she is so hawt." Anyway, I shall be reading more, good luck with the rest of the story. |
LillyStoppable chapter 1 . 4/19/2014 Oh the horrors of cliffies! An update would be awesome! Oooooooh I know! An Easter gift for meupdate! Hearts and hugs, Abby |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2014 Please keep on writing please keep on writing |
Raven J. Haile chapter 1 . 3/12/2014 This is interesting, mayhaps there will be more soon. :3 |
Mariepc chapter 1 . 12/20/2013 HELLO?! PLEASE telll me you are still there. PLEASE UPDATE! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2013 continueeeee |
Javislover13 chapter 1 . 12/5/2013 I love javis, can't wait until she finds out about Jack! |
Angel15Rocks chapter 1 . 11/14/2013 Aww cute please continue :P |
BBirdy chapter 1 . 10/29/2013 Oooooooooooo! Please continue quickly |