| Reviews for System Breakdown |
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cardie4444 chapter 9 . 11/26/2018 WOW this is by far the best Togafuka FanFiction I have ever read. Only one complaint: I wish togami could’ve Kissed her at the end! |
2ilver8ox chapter 9 . 3/13/2015 This is a amazing! I love how you write the characters like who they are and not soften them up like in other fanfics. Thank you so much for writhing this and I hope you pick it up again soon! |
YESYEYSYEYSYESYE chapter 6 . 3/10/2015 omGGGGGGGGGG THIS IS ART OMG I CANT OMGGggGgggg |
OMGGGG chapter 9 . 3/7/2015 omG THE FOGAFUKA FEELS I CANT TAKE IT |
Amendadendron chapter 9 . 2/9/2014 Ah-ha! So that's the end! I really enjoyed this story. I really like the portrait you paint of the Manor, and everything that Togami has dealt with. With each chapter, I got this feeling of being pulled back-and-forth in my opinion of Kojiro, and somewhat with Maya, which made it a little more suspenseful for me, I think. I like the way you've written Fukawa as well, which is important to me since she's my favorite character. Very nice. I hope you write more! |
Amendadendron chapter 8 . 11/30/2013 Very nice, again. Your characters make me curious and the names of your chapters are also a neat touch. I also like how you've written Fukawa in this chapter. |
kyaa chapter 6 . 11/4/2013 omgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg wow togamis father is horrible i feel sorry for fukawa and togami |
Amendadendron chapter 6 . 11/4/2013 Okay, so that wasn't so touching then, I guess! I feel for Fukawa, not knowing how to respond in that situation but I really love what you've done with the pairing in this story. |
Amendadendron chapter 5 . 11/1/2013 I'm excited for the next part! This part is really touching. Very interesting. |
oh noooooooooooo chapter 3 . 10/30/2013 oh noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOO |
Amendadendron chapter 3 . 10/30/2013 You've got a neat setup for the next parts here. I really like your descriptions of Kojiro. Interesting plot twist, too. |
Amendadendron chapter 2 . 10/28/2013 Wow, this one was intense. I like how much thought you've put into all the procedures the group goes through. I love how your fics really do explain why Togami acts the way he does. Nice reference to Sonia Nevermind in there! I'm really looking forward to the next chapters of this as well as Open Like a Book. |