Reviews for Last Straw
Marian Simonetti chapter 1 . 9/6
Great story...Well Done...showed the deep brotherly friendship Steve a and Danny have...
karamel10 chapter 1 . 4/12
loved the story
Sarai chapter 1 . 11/11/2019
awesome
Cubit 2 chapter 1 . 6/7/2016
Very nicely done. Lots of Danny whump - physical and emotional. The escalating argument was very believable. Just like brothers, they know each others weak spots and aren't afraid to use them. Glad Kono was able to help them heal.
Robin chapter 1 . 11/9/2015
Wonderful Story ! Thank You, so much for Sharing
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
good job
robinkristin chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
Great Story !
Evil Cosmic Triplets chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
I really enjoyed this. I liked getting Kono's perspective throughout this. Her worry over Steve and Danny, and then her relief at the end.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
It's awesome :"""")
thewarpedmind1 chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
What a fun story filled with whumpy goodness :)
Phoebe Miller chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
Enjoyed this. :-)
avieryfriend chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
Can't believe I missed reading this one and I'm so glad I did! Beautifully written and poignantly done. Not very often our two favorite guys and friends getting a huge argument like that. Sometimes it takes unfortunate and bad things to happen for us to see the good! The ending left me with a nice warm feeling inside of friendship and Ohana!
LisaG16 chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
great story! really enjoyed all the character interactions.
FicreaderT chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
I really enjoyed this story - nicely done!
A Shieldmaiden of Rohan chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
Great story! Glad it wasn't a deathfic.
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