Another awesome story, I am really enjoying reading through your fics and I can't wait to read some more, even if you may not still be around, I know these are old stories.

Congrats on finishing this story! While I admit I liked the first one better, this one was pretty good too. Shame you never worked on the third one though.

Sheesh, you sure know how to start a story, huh? Of course, it's good you didn't drag it out with filler like some authors do. ;)

O yea... the sequels soon.

That was awesome and I loved it even if it took years. If you ever make a sequel please post a chapter note update here so I can look for it because I don't usually go out of my and remember stuff like sequels unless they're already up. Again, awesome job.

Definitely interested in another sequel, these stories are really good. You captured both of the siblings reactions and emotions just as they should be. I really didn't realise it had been posted in 2013, the years just fly by.
Anyhoo, amazing story and will wait patiently for the next ;)

THERE IS DEFINITE INTEREST HERE I MEEPED WHEN I SAW A NEW CHAPTER I LOVE THIS SO MUCH THANK YOU FOR EXISTING

I'm sad to see the story end, but it was very well written and amazing. I wonder how you are going to fix what happened to Hansel or if you ever plan on doing so. I guess Hansel was my favorite from the movie universe and it would be sad to have such a strong sibling bond end in a months time. Anyways, I look forward to the next installment and I can't wait to see where you go with these characters in it. :)

Great story! Please write a sequel! I need to know what happens!

I want a sequel! Please don't leave it like this! I love Hansel and his self sacrificing older brother ways and Gretal and her blind determination and love for her brother. Great story!

I was very excited to see this update. Thank you! I know how hard it is to keep writing without any obvious support. I really appreciate you finishing this story and I'd love to read the sequel! Now matter how long it takes.

This is really really good, and you're one of my fav authors on this site. I sincerely hope you're not planning on leaving it here. I have to know the price the magic-remover potion came with, and honestly I wanna see Hansel beat up some more. When was the last time he had an injection? I really like what you did in your last story, how Hansel tried to not take his injections so he would die, but I think you could explore it a little more. Like, what happens if he doesn't? Some fics say a seizure followed by the body shutting down, some day he just gets weaker and weaker until he dies.

Yeah for Hansel...and...damn...WHAT HAPPENS?! NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO HANSEL! No...

Anyway,
I really enjoyed this chapter. I really liked the sudden moments of suspense in this whole story. I've been reading these over and over because...THEY ARE SO DAMN good.

Please continue! I'll be hungry for more.

~Outcome5Cross

Oh no Hansel...I knew there was something off with that Kaspar. Can't wait for more!

I love how you write the siblings. How Gretel has such faith in her brother, and feels safer in his presence, even with everything going on.