Omw the ending made me cry soo bad. This was soooo beautiful urghh. Deidara was magnificently in character, so was Hina and their love came into existence so beautifully I just- I loved everything about it! I had wished for a happy ending but urghh it's okay. This was a wonderful read, thank you for sharing! Xx

Damn I was not expecting this well written story of tragic love. Made me tear up at the end. It was so beautiful and heartbreaking.

God this made me cry my eyes out and yet I don't regret reading one bit. Amazed

This is by far the longest one-shot I have ever read and I have no regrets, man. NO REGRETS!

I freakin' love this! You don't know much your work has affected me EMOTIONALLY. I mean, that rarely happens. This story of yours right here is an exquisite piece of gem. A MASTERPIECE! It feels so good and satisying to be able to read a story as good this one. It's just so good, I can't stop saying how good it is. It's so good! (LMAO)

But on a serious note, when Deidara said, "You better not forget about me.",

Man, that hit me right in the feels. It hit me deep.

So deep, I could see Adelle rolling.

But seriously, that line was the one that broke the freaking dam. It was that line that made me start crying like a baby, because I already knew from that line that he was really saying goodbye for real. I felt as though he was so sure that he wasn't going to see Hinata again when he said those words. Aah! It hurts so much! *starts bawling like an infant*

It was beautiful. It was tragic. It was awesome.

This is probably my favorite DeiHina story. There aren't many DeiHina stories out there, and only a few are actually worth reading. I'll most likely be going back to this story and read it when I'm in a mood for some DeiHina love! I've added this to my favorite stories. Thank you so much for writing this! 3

This is brilliant! I want to cry this is so good. A round of applause for you dear author. First, you did an amazing job portraying the characters. Second, the story is really enticing, can be read in one breath. To show a relationship of two characters' that are so unlikely to be ever together and doing it in the way that it is believable, takes a lot of skills as an author. Whilst reading I thought that if Naruto really progressed the way it is written here it would have made a lot of sense and in a way it would have been even better! (And it is coming from a diehard Naruhina shipper). I'm forever thankful for introducing me to this ship in such a beautiful way.

How dare you make me cry like this?!

This was beautiful. Wonderful story!

Wow... That was so well build up. I really, really loved how you have prepared the background for their interaction. I wish it could have ended dirrerently - I know there exists a separate pocket in the universe where it have - but it's fine like this, too. Very beautiful and emotional. Thank you.

Hi again,

I thought this would be light reading but I guess i should have paid more attention to the author's note at the beginning. Damn that was emotional, seeing as Deidara is one of my favorite characters it got me right in the heart... Still it was a beautiful story, I don't usually like tragic endings like this but it fits so well with the characters it seems only right. I'll go cry in a corner for some time now haha, thanks for the emotions and this nice tale !

~Clo

...WHAT THE HELL IN THE WORLD IS THIS- WHY THE ENDING CAME LIKE THIS JUST WHY?! ISNT IT SUPPOSED TO BE A HAPPY ENDING?!

YOU DIDNT PUT ANY ANGSTY ON YOUR GENRE JUST WTF-

NOOOOOOOO I HATE THIS WTF I CRIED, DAMN. I DONT LIKE THIS. IT HURTS. WHY IT TURNED LIKE THIS.

ok i ... i ... cant say a word. This is all i can say. Im speechless. It hurts.

But this story is really a masterpiece. Damn how could you write this so epic. Reall love this omg

Wow.

Woah.

Wow.

I literally don't know what to say.

This was simply amazing.

I never expected that two characters who never even met could be written this perfectly.

The ending really hit me in the feels.

I was expecting him to have faked his own death or something, but to my shock it was actually real.

Thank you for such an amazing fic.

IDK if you know this but Hinata's byakugan have nearly 360 vision and she can see through everything as far as 20km. I feel weirded out when you said she can't see Deidara and she have the capability to see herself the people beyond the door. I'm sorry for this, I know it is too late already but you should know that and if you want to make stories about any characters, you could search their wikia.

The bittersweet stories are always the best. I absolutely loved this, it was beautiful. Thank you for sharing

Jesus Christ man. Your stories are such masterpieces.

This fic was so good. Like holy shit.
I mean I wasn't expecting that sort of development between the two, but it'd made sense. The romance aspect of it, was wonderful.
Also Hinata understanding the beauty behind the chaos is so stunning. You weaved two polar opposite characters to be with one another and it was gorgeous and bittersweet.
Thank you for sharing!