Love it!

great story

Loved it, what a story. Very rereadable.

Great ending with Edward being named their King alongside his Queen. The addition of their two daughters and hopefully a son on the way. It was kind of funny to read that Sorin and Beth . . . mated? . . . imprinted? . . . either way, I laughed at Edward's response to it. This was absolute fun to read. I've enjoyed every part of it. What a wonderful imagination you possess. I am so happy that I stumbled upon this tale. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us here.

That was a very good wedding. Love that you added the handfasting portion, that was quite lovely. The hair combs and the tradition of all the women in the family wearing them on their wedding day, was also lovely. I liked that Esme snuck in a letter and pictures of Isle Esme into the brochures for Bella to use it for the honeymoon. Edward's absolute elation on her choice was fantastic. This has been so very fun to read, I am sad that it is only one more chapter. Love this story.

Interesting that she knocked out for two full days after her mate-sharing light show for the Denali sisters. Wow. I do hope that once she is changed, it will not tire her out so badly. She was fantastic with the real werewolves. Sorin was not backing down. I loved that she threatened to take away the very thing that he exists for . . . his were gene. It was really cool that when she changed him back, all the wolves were a better version of themselves. No longer scrawny and gross but, shiny and more filled out.

You got me alright. I thought for sure it would be Tanya. I like that you went the route of Irina being the bitch to Bella and not the clichéd Tanya. Eleazar wanting to kneel when he realized exactly who Bella was, was pretty entertaining. I like that Tanya was nice right off the bat. Very interesting ending of the chapter, with them all finding their mates. Unfortunately, they don’t age so, it could be next year or, a hundred years from then. At least she showed it them and they will have faith.

Mike needs to learn boundaries. He’s disgusting putting his arm around her shoulders, when she never wanted him there. Jessica and Lauren are such typical high school bitches. I loved how Edward walked into that lunchroom and let everyone know that he’s back with Bella. Oddly, Jessicawas too stupid to catch on. She hurts my brain with her stupidity. Looking forward to Bella fucking up Tanya.

I was so ready to pounce all over you for not warning about a major character death, then you fixed it. Whew. I really don’t understand how Bella was super witch when in Volterra, yet when faced with one bitchy vamp, she falls apart. What gives? She could’ve anihilatted Victoria with her hands behind her back with how she handled the Voltaire, yet here she may as well have been human. I don’t understand how with more powers than before, she failed like that. Plus, nobody asked WHY Charlie had to appear to have died. So, this reader has no idea why he had to be dead. So confused.

Oh for fuck's sake! Bella froze and Victoria actually has no idea that Bella is the all powerful witch that she is. She should get her ass up off the damn ground and think 'Charlie' and pop up right in front of Victoria. That'll freak Victoria out enough that maybe she will freeze and Bella can take her out once and for all. Poor Charlie, as he has got to be freaking out right now. And! When will he ever learn that he cannot shoot a vampire? Good grief.

Edward backpedaling about being too soon and too young, was funny to read. Poor guy. She just needed to process it all. I am so glad she said yes. I was shocked that they made love for the first time. To use your nickname, Mr. 1918, has left the building. I loved that she teleported them to their meadow. Good thing nobody else was there. Also good that it was there and not someplace embarrassing. I like that Leah can control Jake. I hope someone explains to the wolves that the mate bond with vampires is just like imprinting. I do not think they know that. I don't think Jake ever wanted to acknowledge it before now. I liked Bella's vision of Leah as a wolf.

That was a beautiful gift from her mother. So much history in it. And lovely, too. I was loving that Bella sort of/kind of got Rosalie. She really was off base there in her being pissed that her family and the Volturi are okay with Bella being human. I loved how she showed Rosalie, and the others by default, that she was not simply human. Emmett and all of his questions. So inquisitive. I really was not surprised that Jake would go all wolf on Edward, being the turd that Jake is. Interesting that Bella herself, had a vision of Jake and Leah imprinting. I wonder if Bella is a sort of sponge? She can take on the powers around her. Will she be able to mind read soon? She has been around Alice a wee bit longer since she came to see Bella. And then they ran off to save Edward. That would be really kind of cool if should could use the other powers. It would come in handy when she is to be Queen. She would know the true intentions of people, supernatural or not, when in front of her. Yes, she could rely on Edward for that but, it would be neat if she did. When she stated she was going home after that bonfire, I thought for sure it was time for Victoria to attack. I was pleasantly surprised to see she was safely home and back in Edward's arms.

I am sooooooo jealous of that teleporting thing. I've always, ALWAYS, chosen that when the 'super power you'd want if you could have one' question comes into play. Could you even imagine? Blink, lunch it Italy. Blink, dinner in Paris. Blink, dancing to romantic music under the Aurora Borealis. The possibilities are endless! I really liked how you reworked the coming home part of the story. Charlie shooting at Edward. Renee 'popping' in and then back out, once she told Charlie that Bella cannot be grounded. I love that Renee is embracing her powers again. Edward certainly calmed Bella down at the beginning of the chapter. Letting her know it could mean anything, what they both saw of the future. Why would he have to give up his family? Bella lost me when she said that he would have to sacrifice being with them. Strange.

I have to say I really like the direction you've taken in this. I love that Dora asked Bella to get them home via the rainbow. Her tentativeness in doing so, was sweet. I really liked that she ripped into Edward and actually threw him into a tree . . . LMAO. It was wonderful to learn that Bella and Alice are truly related by blood. Maybe that is why Alice had seen Bella so strongly, before she met her? It was rather remarkable that Edward was able to walk with her through the tapestry, and that he too, saw the meadow. Then, he was allowed access to the fountain room. I am guessing that due to her ancestry, plus the mate bond, this is allowing Edward entrance to a place he normally would not even see, due to the magic that surrounds their home. It is really very fascinating how that is all working. Her having golden eyes, and standing with Edward, to all bowing to them both, was very intriguing. You've got quite the imagination and I am loving it.

Wow, even Edward and Alice knew of the O'Quinn name, as they bowed right away to Bella and Pandora. Interesting. I do wonder why you had Bella and Alice fly to Italy and race through the streets, when Bella could've just brought them both there magically. She could've said to Alice, no questions now, I will explain later and left it at that.