Awwwwww I really liked where this story was going. Please continue don't give up

I was so hopefully when you posted and your note made it seem that you where back and writing but now 8 months later no updates, have you now abandoned this?

Love this! I love this Lauren. I always felt like she let everyone walk over her all the time.

Love your story keep them coming

I’m absolutely in love with this. It’s so different, yet as I read it, the picture you perceive is so clear in my head. It’s like I’m watching the show from your words. Seeing their expressions and all the details. In actuality...It’s kind of, blurring things for me. From what did happen on the show to what I’m reading here. Is it sad? I like this version better.
Any who. I can’t wait to read more. Thanks for updating.

I Love this story

Amazing story

Great chapter!

Holy moly! That was intense!

Good that your back with this story.

I cannot but worry about Bo talking to her father. Seems like an out of body experience as she has never mentioned or shown this to be true so far. Still looking forward to see what dastardly deeds Ava is hiding and how you go about pulling all of it together. Their conversation read like two pen pals.

But as I said I'm looking forward to how you pull it together.

Oh I loved the new chapter!

I don't think Bo saying she talks to her father is really a secret because it's really none of their business. He's her father, not theirs. Expected a little bit of emotion out of Lauren, but she's been "out" there during this entire story. The rest are just watching and waiting for the Mesmer to win. She has skeleton's too. Once those are exposed they'll all be Team WTF.

Evony and Damon are a treat outside of the other activities.

I loved that there was a new chapter to this one! It made me reread the whole thing which I enjoyed doing. I like how Lauren and Bo are so conflicted with their relationship and it’s something they need to work if they can ever move forward. I also like that Lauren has multiple suitors. As it should be. :)

Long overdue convo there. Bo has been holding on to some seriously old shit. Lauren was cool for answering, but Bo was wrong for using those past deeds to justify her present fuck ups. She is still keeping secrets and she keeps Tamsin on a string to validate her point of view. She wants Lauren to choose her but why? Because she loved her first? True...but does she love her best? That’s the real question here. So far, Ava is answering.

Amazing chapter!