Kandra's last name is Young

Smut is way too easy to write.
Many write lemons or smut, or even sex scenes...
Few do it well, so glad to see you know your limits.

The best thing to do is hint.
And let the reader imagine the details.

Describe some of the buildup, hugs, holding, kisses, caressing.
Then get the lovers somewhere private.
Have clothes gotten out of the way.
One or two sentences about love and passion and connection.
Do not be crude, no four letter words, use longer descriptions such as manhood or flower.
Skip to the end, have our lucky ones once again holding each other.
Show they are happy, satisfied, relaxed, perhaps snuggling until sleep claims them.

Making love in real life can be exercise, hard work even, but very rewarding!
Writing it well is work too.

I just wanted to tell you the episode of that quote is "Bad Girls".

Hmm the Watcher's Guide explains 7-3-0? I have to get my hands on those books. I know there has been fan speculation about 7-3-0 having to do with Buffy's death in "The Gift" but no one supposedly knew for sure as it was just speculation.

magnificent story ...

loved reading it _

Slayers have been around since primordial Africa. All through the middle ages, up through the cowboy days, civil war, and to the present. Not sure how long the Watchers have been around, but certainly into the Middle Ages. There would be enough Watchers' diaries for the entire school of Hogwarts, let alone just the seventh year class. I am curious...who's diary did Draco get? ;)

Hah! Loved this chapter, and I really love your A/N of 'Grr, Argh.'

Mutant Enemy, much? ;D

Cool 1st chap can't wait for no. 2!

Very nice. I like the way you put every one together. Also, I loved the prophecy. Also very sneaky way to turn Angel human without having to go in detail about. Anyway I really like this fic.

-Kate

Hi, according to Joss in an interview he did a couple of years ago, Faith was given the last name Lahane in the comics, though it was never used in the show. I am pretty sure Tara was McLean and Anya was Jenkins.

Tara's was but not sure about Anya's but i think it is mentioned in some books and Faith's is mentioned in books. Tara's last name is McClay Anya's is Jenkins and Faith's is Lehane

I personally think that Harry should have gone dressed as Angelus, Hermione and Darla, Ron as William, and Dawn as Drusilla. That would have been cool.

just to let you know since you asked Faiths last name is Lehane, Anyas is Jenkins, and Taras is McClay. Oh and I also love yoour story.

omg i love this story this was the second harry/buffy crossover i read but the other was a one shot so that doesn't count my friend told me too read this and i was like no no NO but it is great i loved it you ahould do a sequal of like the wedning then them moving in and stuff but yeah great job

Oh God..I must say this is the best HP/BtVS crossover I've read in my whole life (or at least as long as I've been reading fics). You used all my favorite couples, especially the BuffyAngel and HarryHermione. I noticed what I think were some insinuations concerning Oz with the WillowTara, and also Faith with Sirius, but as you never cleared that out I don't quite know what happened there.

As I said at the beggining I loved the fic, the importance you gave to everybody, to their individual powers. I had feared Dawn would be dying, thankfully that didn't happen.

I must admit I would have liked to read more: things like Dawn meeting the Weasleys, Harry meeting the Grangers, Buffy and Angel's wedding, what Oz intentions truly were, what happened afterwards with people like Spike, Malfoy, Faith and Sirius (and everyone else really). But I understand that you didn't have the inspiration to continue (I seem to have the same problem with one of my fics).

So, after all my speech, I just insist, great work. Deffinitely one of my favorites from now on.