Reviews for The Devil On Your Back
Guest chapter 12 . 5/14/2018
I’m hooked on this story thank you for posting it and hope you contiue
Guest chapter 12 . 5/7/2018
Good lord this is something! I didnt know how I would feel reading what Jermione has gone through and still Ron is being a right asshole! I can’t wait to see where this goes and how things play out with Severus and Hermione! Please keep up the amazing work! I hope you update soon!
Monnies21 chapter 12 . 5/7/2018
Loving this story even though Ron is the bad guy.
mandiecandie chapter 12 . 5/6/2018
Lovely story so far. Looking forward to the next update.
elizabethrose1974 chapter 1 . 5/6/2018
please please please continue this! I love it!
Rc0321 chapter 12 . 5/6/2018
Really emotional! Can’t wait to see what happens next
RhodaBush chapter 12 . 5/6/2018
More soon please
Dianne9577 chapter 12 . 5/5/2018
Eagerly awaiting more! I really enjoy your stories. Maybe more updates if I leave a trail of virtual cookies and brownies... a with a side of cake?
emjrabbitwolf chapter 12 . 5/4/2018
Given Snape’s background when it comes to abuse, given what his mother and he suffered at his father’s hands, he’s a character that is in a position to actually understand what Hermione goes through in this story.

Right now the dark wizard is acting in a controlled manner. There’s a very fragile and upset witch in his space and reacting violently won’t help matters at all.
However I feel that his own rage is just quietly simmering away, awaiting an outlet. Likely too is that of Harty and Ginny Potter, both known to be impulsive and hot tempered in the past.

Sadly this situation is very real. Someone who appears strong, stable and in a “good” relationship, can be trapped by fear in an abisive situation.
It’s shown great courage by Hermione to take the steps needed to not only walk away from her marriage but tell those she cares about, the truth.
Few could do both those things in one day, and I doubt she’d have done either without the catalyst Severus provided.

The poor woman hasn’t been loved or in love for some time now, and is currently experiencing a vast amount of emotional and mental upheaval. Likely more to come once she decided upon action plan (divorce, file charges, spilt assets etc), but she notices this as well as the attraction she has for Severus, something that’s been building over last five years. Yet she shows her bright intelligence by noticing this and knowing now isn’t the right time.
Any action the pair make upon their feeling towards each other will lead to talk and speculation, sad but true...
Hopefully time (more than a couple of days) and the support of their closet friends, those that believe in them both, will help them through, then accept any relationship, should one develop.

Short chapters, but concise, covering the important parts of each without padding by flowery language. It’s a tough subject and as such can need short, tough literature to cover it in a truthful manner.
Looking forward to future chapters and have story F&F-ed
cares 1970 chapter 12 . 5/4/2018
thank you so much for the new chapter and hope that your weekend is a nice one and you are able to enjoy
LimelightLass72 chapter 12 . 5/4/2018
I am so happy to see you’re back and continuing your story! A rather difficult subject but you are doing it well. Severus and Hermione are my favorite pair. Thanks for continuing!
Monnies21 chapter 11 . 3/4/2018
Just read this and really like it... Please update...
Prunus padus chapter 1 . 2/7/2018
Oh, but post war hgss is just my cup of tea. I like that they run an apothecary and I think your writing is really good. Thanks.
elizabethrose1974 chapter 11 . 8/5/2017
I hope u update this soon!
nordseemoewe chapter 11 . 7/17/2017
Thanks for sharing the story. It's awesome. I like how Ron acts in front of his parents but than shows his reak face again at the end of the chapter.
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