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AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT! THIS IS INCREDIBLE

I love your story, I read another one and loved it you should be a writer.

...eh if I flame you will you give me more hot smex scenes?

COOL!

Omg soooo HOT xD awesome!

I HATE THIS SOOOOO MUCH, IT SUXXXX...was that enough hate to get you famous? Because to be honest I want everyone to read this awesome effing story. I loved it so much, especially the part where it said Ciel was wearing a cat bell. I just felt warm all over at that. And lol 'Better With The Lights Off' was playing in the background as I read this sooo yeah just made the story all the more better. Sorry to have wasted you're time with this long ass review. Now I must go, the blood from my nosebleed is starting to set into my shirt.

Note: Don't read yaoi while wearing a white shirt...

Brilliant! Simply wonderful!

OMFG!
*Dies of a nosebleed*

AMAZING!

Good job. :)

Perfect seduction technic

The man.. the boy.. the man... the man..the man...the man..the boy...the boy... Jesus, isn't that annoying? Your story was very hot but you use those words so often that it took me out of the story and I didn't want to read it anymore because it was so fucking redundant. You write well you just need to fix that problem. There were a few grammatical mistakes but those weren't as bad as repeating 'the man' ad 'the boy.' You could have used him/his too.

I gotta say if someone reads this all the way through then turns all rude and shit... that's their problem and they shouldn't have read it to begin with.

So sweet! More!