please continue this story soon

Ohhh myyy fuckkkin gg goddsss I so so so in love with this story! I read it non stop last night to chapter 12 when I fell asleep after 2am and then the minute I woke up finished the rest of these and omg I’m crying! Like I pick this fic on a whim and was like I’ll just read the first page to get more of a summary of it but then I was so intrigued, especially with how Bella was stuck in that carriage hahah . And then how she met Jaz and i was swooning the whole time and just adoredd how she got along so well with all his family and I really enjoyed the extras u put into the fic, really made the past scenes more realistic! (Litterally I was here googling how big 20 acres and 160 acres were and calculating how far it would have taken them to walk or ride it and then compared it to how quick it was be for Vampire Jaz to run it hahah) Am so curious thou too how his family took both Jaz and Bella being MIA, I hope they just imagined them to be a happy runaway couple Cos care about them so much and didn’t want them to be sad!

Also too I loved Lotte! And PJ too, that was a nice touch to explain it all
(made me think how when Bella has to explain why she was so reading to marry Jaz after only officially dating his a few weeks/months, was she could explain they were like penpals after PJ died and it helped her cope with the lost, to have someone to write to. So that could explain how they felt like they’d know each other for months!Thats my writing tibbit for that day; writing an added canon divergent to an already canon divergent AU fanfic hahah!)

Baby Jere is so adore and love how that all turned out! Really intrigued to know how their future would have went thou, like he and Bella would grow older but not Jaz do they’d have to move and I feel like easiest way for B to still have her fam come see them would jsut be every time her parents visit, Bella just does aging makeup on Jasper

I feel like Bella would eventually wanna turn when Jere is bit older and then when he is like 18 or something they let him decide what he wanted to do (all thru growing up he knew his fam was different but it was like a Disney movie for him like magic haha)

Anyways many many kudos to u and this fic! (Even thou it’s over 5yrs later after last update hahah) xx

I can't wait for you to update the story, I love it so much!

This is one of my favorite fic ever please update!

Oh please write more. I need to read the conclusion.

Hi! Are you gonna update? Would love to read more!

more please update

Love love love!

Oh please come back! This story is so amazing and sweet! I need more! 3

Please update! It’s one of the few Bella and Jasper baby fan fictions

Please finish this story.

I love this story so much! Please please please tell me that you are going to update it?!

Please I beg of you continue this

Absolutely brilliant twist on this great story. Please please finish it xx

Hi, there! I've been reading your story for the past few days and just now I finished it. I must say that I loved the way you developed the characters and the story! It's amazing!