Great story! When is the next chapter? Love how you expanded raditz's character before he became the raditz we all know and hate/love

I'm really enjoying this story. I like the characters you are building and their adventures. :)

Why don't you update any more

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This getting good why couldn't I have found this a chapter later

i just read through this and I'm impressed. Your Bardock is written perfectly and has something so many other bardock stories fail to grasp. Bardock is a killer he's not going to magicly become all good just because he saw a few visions. So well done on that. The Oc mate of Bardock nice work good to see she has some traits of Goku's traits. We know Goku gets his sense of responsibility to friends and family from Bardock though. This being he cares more the fight and creating fights than for his friends.

Raditz he still has innocence and is beginning to have an inferiority complex from how he's treated from both his parents and vegeta. So nice work with him.

Nappa though I honestly never thought of him being as such a brute as you make him out to be. He was King Vegeta's loyal guard turned nurse maid to Vegeta ;p

I honestly would think he'd respect Bardock for what he achieved when credit is due. Hell even when Raditz died he wanted to bring back Raditz he in general wanted the saiyans united. Honestly that's my only issue with that. Other than that fantastic job and keep it up.

que paso con mya

Oh no bardock is going to die!

Hmm, considering this about 20yrs before Goku faces them, I imagine that the duo arent near as strong as they would be later, unless you go with an aspect of the Ginyu Force always being as strong as they are. With Bardock injured already twice as strong as Nappa ends up, I can see that if Bardock survives, there are quite a lot of changes in store.

I hope Bardock'll be alive in the future :D

this story is really good ... cant believe it doesn't have more reviews/favs

I'm loving this ha!

Bardock and the rest of his family need to get to earth and find Goku!

please please please put power levels at the end of each chapter

Whoa, no wonder Bardock's so messed up in this story if THAT was the 'childhood' he had to endure. Goku definitely hit the jackpot when he landed on Earth and hit his head. I wonder just how much of his recent visions are gonna affect Bardock, if at all. And if his dream-memory will help encourage any possible changes. Probably not, for a while at least.

But if there's one thing that I'm really starting to feel shared sympathety and annoyance towards, it's Bardock's never-ending visions that leaves him baffled and vulnerable on the battlefield. I can only hope that when/if Bardock reaches Earth (or even Namek for that matter), he uses the Dragon Balls to get rid of 'curse' once and for all. For all that it's helpful at times, it's equally as potentially dangerous as Frieza's Death Ball attack in the right scenario!

Please update again soon!