English is really not your native language, is it.

This was nice.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

Guys new SAILOR MOON MINI SERIES
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Good story. Good six chapters.

interesting please update

- w a s - a wesome. Just a quick formality. I think I noticed a few spelling mistakes. But then again who doesn't make spelling mistakes on this sight. I can't say for sure but I think a coma or semi;colon, or a dash should've been somewhere else. But I'm more of a grammar failure. Not that I'm saying you're a failure. Like most author's I review to brighten your day. However, before I think about going any further with your stories I'm going to read other people's stories. If I find yours to be more interesting I'll return to you. Good day :

oh shit please update however im a lil confused queen serenity was good turn evil then good? and usagi a princess and hates mamoru and rei and minako and pluto?

please update new chapter

interesting idea and story i like it please write more that would be cool. *cookies for you*

good story and all but when are you going to get back to the mama usagi story